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You know, under normal circumstances, hearing that particular phrase from a new girlfriend would be pretty humiliating.
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ouch!
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In regards to the discussion on the shared experiment between three of the princesses: "Since we're not related, it'll be okay!"
Yeah, I knew that girl back in high school. Sweet. Sociable. Easy to get along with. Other girls hated her, though.
... ... and how did Twilight know this, exactly? Where's that fic?
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How did Twilight know how to kiss like Shining Armor? I was going for genetics, but I'd totally read a fic going in other directions.
P.S. Also, I love your avatar!
And so my journey through the story continues and i noticed something i can help out with
I am glad that you are here to try it
Whilst not incorrect in spelling the context seems strange, the "but" is meant to introduce something to contrast the previous part, but the statement after the but isnt in any contrast at all. Sorry for telling you how to do your job so to speak but it just seems to be an incorrect usage of the word but
That being said i am still loving the story, very well written, good quality work.
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Fixed, and well... I can't defend that last one.
It may be incorrect, but it's how I write.
I hope there isn't much more that breaks your immersion.