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>I am pleased with this
Winghugs are the best hugs, it's a scientific fact.
We need a scene or chapter where David meets - and accepts - Luna's 'other half', Nightmare Moon. If he loves Luna he ought to meet and accept Nightie as well.
Quite pleasing. Yes, I will require more.
7627340 wasn't nightmare moon banished to the 666th layer of the abyss or something?
7706065 no she was banished to the moon for 1000 years
I feel bad, as i have pointed out mistakes in previous chapters and i don't want to be a bother when i notice more, would you like for me to point out the mistakes i notice as i'm reading through your story in spite of how frequent they are?
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Ouch! (j/k Yes, I know you didn't mean it in that context.)
Honestly, I'm glad you are finding these issues. Perhaps to save time you could send them to me in batches as a PM?
I would be quite grateful.