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they blew it....Rarity and Ember really blew it big time
Great chapter. Ember and Rarity screwed up. And now Garble's plan is almost complete.
This is the picture you are referring to:cdn-img.fimfiction.net/story/dmts-1461542152-326430-full
8067530 Yes indeed.
I bloody hate garble.. I hope he dies in this story.. I love it when he dies, cause he always deserves it.
Celestia BUCKING DAMN IT!!!!
WHY DOES LOVE MAKE PONIES AND DRAGONS SO FUCKING STUPID??!!
It's just a simple 'I love you'--hell even less than that. "I like you". Three Cadence-bucking WORDS!!!!
Well you two both fucking did it, for ponies and Dragons...not to mention that you played right into Garbles greedy hateful claws...you know shit's gonna go down. There's at least a significant conflict on the horizon--quite appropriate when at the end of this chapter on the beach, it shows that there was pretty significant storm on the way.
You know what? Fuck Ember, and Fuck Rarity. Fuck them both in the bucking arse with a rose bush...if anything I think that Spike should be getting romantic with somepony else (and yes that pony could even mean a different mare of the Mane 7, like Starlight for starters). Don't even waste your time on two whiny cunts--one that is too damn scared to admit that she have feeling for another dragon that treated her like a dragon, and the other is so jealous and paranoid that she strung a male for so damn long believing she's got him forever that she doesn't realize that said male has started to see other mares, not to mention that she's waiting so damn long for the male to confess his feelings that she's losing him to someone that actually tells their true feelings, no matter how mortifying or embarassing it can be.
And I have some issues for Spike being so fucking clueless as well, but the actions speak for themselves....
Both females should have damn well known that we males are stupid as fuck...you have to spell it out to us, otherwise we will not get it, or worse, take it the wrong way.
I am really hoping that Spike hooks up with Starlight, Twilight, Fluttershy--hell any pony (males can work too--I see Spike as bisexual), just as long as that special somepony is NEITHER EMBER NOR RARITY...
You two are such fucking idiots....
This is my reaction after reading the chapter, thanks to Rarity and Ember being complete idiots:
( start at minute 1;15 up to 1:25)
I wonder if any one is going to question how garble got the pictures. he is a known hater of ponys and he wasnt supposed to be any where in equestra, yet he seems to have "perfect" proof on how the mission failed.
I know this is likely not going to happen but im hoping he ends up pissing spike off that he ends up doing a sort of trnsformation into the gaint full grown dragon "like when he got greedy" and just put garble in his place.
Dude. I hope when they find out Garble is behind this. Spike beats the living hell out of him.
8067830 I think Spike actually has a clue at this point about what this was all about. After all, he did hear the whole rant Ember and Rarity had about him.
8067897 It's not like he was banned from Equestria or anything. He can still go there. Just wait and see what unfurls. He's thought things out.
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I hope you're right.
After all, the truth is that there is always more than one side to a story, and right now we are really seeing things from:
-- Ember's side (I'm surprisingly attracted to a male dragon that acts so differently from other males),
-- and Rarity's side (I'm afraid of admitting that I like a male that some could call a little brother to one of my best friends, but now another female wants to take him away from me)
-- but we truly have to explore Spike's side (there are two females that are dear to me, and I have feelings for both of them. How can I choose one over the other? Do either really see me in 'that way' or is it just me?)
...not to mention that I'm pretty sure that the others are not completely oblivious to what's going on..Applejack and Twilight probably can figure out things, and I'm surprised that Pinkie hasn't blurt out the white elephant in the room yet, considering how she usually can read anypony else like Twilight when she's reading 'War and Peace'...
You've got a pretty interesting point stopping point that this story have been left in this, but I definitely trust your judgement on what happens going forward.
I love the suspense you are building for the next chapter.
8068725 Technically in this chapter and the previous one, we have explored Spike's feelings in regards to both Ember and Rarity. He likes both of them, but can't decide on what to do. He's more mad now that they both screwed up something he worked hard on, and doesn't even know what to think of them now that they were fighting over him.
>> The Dragon Warlock True but why go there? he doesnt like poniys. so why would he be in mayjor cities and towns . Why be there at the same time as Ember. And if know one saw him thats raises even more question since he he would stick out like a sore thumb. (and im guesing one of the elders will note that a tansformation orbe just so happen to went missing while garble is away). im sorry but i hate when people dont ask obvious question of some one who so happens to have something to help their views or something when every one and their grandmother knows they try anything to get what they want.
in z nation a couple of cultist kids just come back and no one question them.
in how to train your dragon tv searis a guy who hates dragons and live away from every budy cause they hate him and he hates them. HE just so happens to be around when ever something goes wrong and blames the dragons.
in gravity falls no one question why dipper voice sounds different and has different colored eyes with slit pupuals.
sorry for the little rant.
8069871 One thing that's important to remember is Garble is not alone in hating the dragon-pony union. Ember made mention that not everyone is happy about it, and I'm willing to bet some of them are council members who like Garble are just looking for an excuse to call off the alliance.
I'm sure at least one council member will be smart enough to bring up the things you mentioned about Garble being in pony lands unnoticed, and maybe even put two and two together as far as the transformation talisman goes. However they have no hard evidence of sabotage on Grable's part who can claim he didn't trust the ponies and just wanted to make sure the dragon lord remained safe. In the eyes of the council Garble's acquisition of evidence would be suspect at best, but it would still be proof that their lord was attacked by a member of the race they are supposed to be creating peace with.
8069871 It's exactly like what 8070253 just said. Remember in the earlier chapters, there were clearly signs some dragons were not ready for the new changes. Some wanted to welcome the ponies, and others wanted nothing to do with them and there was no need to create an alliance with them. So Garble actually has some ground here in what he's done. Just cause he hates ponies, doesn't automatically raise so many red flags to the Dragon Council that they would find it extremely suspicious.
Only now noticed a small error
I believe you meant Rarity and Ember.
They'll settle this in court.
You know what
It would be dramatic to have garble HAVE those pictures...but how does he know he HAS good pictures? Did he get them developed? Did he make sure the cap was off? Does he know how the aperture, shutter setting, and f-stop work?
I want Garble to have shitty pictures.
Cliff Hanger!
I think this is going to go one of two ways: either garble is going to have bad pictures and will be arrested once the dragons put two and two together about him, leaving the love triangle to sort things out alone. Or the alliance will be put in jeopardy and Spike himself will step in and speak to the dragon council and convince them to keep the alliance going, maybe with help from Celestia. The latter would be really cool to see, I think, so I hope it goes that way. Keep up the good work!
Spember for the win!8067602
You could ask Pia-sama if she could make you a nice cover art for your fimfiction.
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Now that takes me back
Rarity must have been playing A LOT of Mario 64 do throw ember like that
Rarity and EMBER.
please fix it.