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Keep going. This is getting real interesting.
What magazines?
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I believe it is these type of magazines.
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Behold the TRUE cure to Spike's wingless problem, puberty.
Oh Garble you are not all that smart to mess with two females that have their eyes on the same person. When they find out better hope Twi finds you first as if they do you well be eating via a straw.
I started reading this with chapter 1, so I apologize that I haven't commented before now with this. Usually when a story like this tickles my fancy, I have to make a few comments on it, or at least 1 a chapter.
So this will be for the current chapter.
It's about time that Ember started playing the game, obviously Spike's such a hot property and Rarity clearly isn't gonna take Spike easily. Also, she needs to look at the mirror. It's obvious that she's getting growing romantic feelings for Spike, despite the blatant 'we are only friends' Schick. Anyone with half a brain will see an obvious tsundere when we see it. And honestly, this feud brewing between Rarity and Ember is kind of Spike's fault--his comments and elation about getting to see Ember again was the catalyst. His comments have indirectly forced Rarity to take a long look at herself with her current relationship with the dragon, and it seems that she doesn't like the fact that she knows she takes advantage of Spike's crush to pretty much manipulate him to her every whim. She also know that even though she doesn't like to confront it, Ember is right about how she treats Spike, and obviously Rarity, being the hopeless romantic she is, can really see a bit of a spark between Ember and Spike starting with the Gauntlet of Fire.
Also, it's just plain jealousy--Rarity doesn't like it that Spike's smitten with someone else after all this time, and now Ember is here, and even though Em's a tsundere, she's real about her feelings for the one dragon that introduced her to friendship.
And to top it all off, Garble is there to be a complete asshole and want to fuck up some thing that should have been a long time coming.
Honestly, I'm waiting for the chapter where Spike stops being the prototypical clueless male and call both Ember and Rarity on their collective bullshit--Ember for being so aloof and scared that she has feelings for another dragon, and Rarity for being a bitch because eventually she took Spike for granted and now that Ember's in the picture, she's falling to being a spoiled brat that lost her toy to another kid and is whining about it. Then I think Spike would actually choose one of them. Warlock, I know that you are a Sparity writer as I myself am a Sparity fan, but for this one, I would like for once have Rarity see that she ultimately lost Spike because she took him for granted and also played hard to get. Seriously, Rarity frankly trying too hard to make everypony and dragon see that Spike's your special somepony. Why did it have to take possibly losing him to realize how much he means to Rarity?
Looking forward to the next chapter!!
7337037 Thanks for reading it up to this point. To be fair in Spike's defense, he's not exactly fully aware he's fallen for Ember. He talks about her a lot, but doesn't realize he's fallen for her as well. He's mostly keen on making sure this trip is going well and hoping that dragons and ponies can finally get along. This whole crush thing will eventually get addressed in a future chapter.
There's a lot more to come in the future, but all parties involved will eventually see their own faults. Just you wait and see.
The pancakes aren't the only things that are extremely salty
I really hope the blushing is just blushing and not something more between Twilight and Matches. Also I want Twilight to find that note at Rarity's and have her get mad at trying to blame Ember.
Stay back people dead dragon walking , dead dragon walking . Now Mr Garble any last words before you fry !