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I'm going to enjoy seeing Garble pay for what he's done.
Why did Ember not order him to stand down?
how I hope to see garble between bars for plotting and acting against international relationships
Garble's actions are the most funny thing here imao.
All the 'punch ya in the face, then take your stuff to further my nefarious "schemes", without any second thoughts and gloating all the way in'
A true cartoon'ish villain!
"Oh Spike, do you remeber those two friends that you hate? Well they wont bother you anymore"
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she couldnt even get a word in let alone a comand. With ash cuttign her off and insiting on protecting emebr while mutiple things gong on Ember didnt have a chance in hell.
So the Dragons invade Equestria and kidnap Rarity in violation of every principle of sovereign nations and Twilight's first thought is to track down a lawyer? She should be demanding Rarity's return, a formal apology, and Ash's head on a platter under threat of WAR.
Dude. I hope Spike kicks Garble's ass.
Great chapter.
It may be a little cliched, but I honestly want a return of Greed Spike from S.O.M.E or at least the Guarding Spike from the MLP:FIM Guardians of Harmony toy set...
Also, I have to admit that I like how Master Ash is protrayed here. Sure he's quite cross about everything (and cross probably doesn't even cover it). But at the same time, he's being portrayed quite fairly. Despite the issues of obvious coercion by Garble, and the possible issues of narcissism because Garble is his grandson, he's willing to see both sides of the issue. He also allows Twilight a way to prove Rarity's innocence, because let's face it--it's the death penalty for her if she's pronounced guilty. I'm very pleased that he isn't just blindly believing Garble's claims, as well as respecting Twilight's title, calling her Princess. Usually when dragons show up, most are blatantly disrespectful to ponies in the first place.
Obviously things are gonna get much worse before it gets better, but at least I do hope that Ember and Rarity can bury the proverbial hatchet--if just to survive and help the fledgling alliance survive after a near-fatal blow to it. And when it comes to the ultimate decision of who Spike decides to pursue romatically, the one that he chooses vows to treat him like the prince that he is, and the one that he turns down will accept why she wasn't chosen, and use it to remedy her mistakes for a love of her own with someone else (and yes, I say someone, not somepony; it's possible that the rejected female could find affection and possible love from another creature.)
Also, I can't help but think about it, but somehow at the end there will be a dragon/pony romance. I just can't help it, but I can see Princess Twilight and Matches together. Especially after it's revealed that Matches is a former soldier in the Dragon military. Maybe the potential punishment for Matches could be exile, which he's forced from the Dragon Lands and Princess Twilight offers him a place to live after it. You could unofficially see it as a retirement of sorts anyway...
8226112 This is beyond Ember's control now. I explained earlier in the story that the Dragon Council were the ones who made the final decisions in a lot of major events or possible changes. With Ember being assaulted, they have decided to take over and bring Rarity to justice and protect Ember.
8226756 Keep in mind this. Ash was furious about what had happened and wanted Rarity found ASAP to arrest her for what could be considered a crime against dragon kind and causing an international incident. While he technically went into Equestria with a big army, his goal was not to invade, but to capture Rarity and have her stand trial.
8227622 That's how I was going with Ash. He's furious yes, but not without reason or logic. He wants to know what happened and how this happened. It's how dragons should be portrayed instead of blind rage.
I think with this chapter and how close Ember and Rarity were to burying the hatchet, I think things between them are starting to look up at last. The romance interest for Spike is something I'm still kind of debating on. It's obvious Rarity and Ember both know now that they've messed up the alliance and Spike's feelings, but we'll see where this goes.
As for Matches and Twilight, I'm not sure what to do about them. I've hinted at them being a couple, but not sure if I want to fully embrace the idea or not. It's something I'll consider down the road.
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And that's why his head is on the list of demands. It's meaningless to have any sort of deal with a country that can't nail down it's loose cannons. If the dragons want Equestria to treat them as a credible partner, they need to punish Ash to Equestria's satisfaction and return Rarity. If they refuse, then they should be treated as part and party to his actions. If they can't hold him to account, then they aren't a functioning state and Equestria is in the clear to send whatever forces are deemed necessary to mount a rescue.
https://derpibooru.org/1461190 who will spike choose the hot girl or the other hot girl? maybe none of them in the end.... ((crosses fingers,................... GO WITH RARITY...................))
Yeah, good chapter, but it was loaded with that classic issue in writing that I always have: people refusing to speak up and say 'no, you don't know what happened, stop cutting me off and let me tell you'.
Can't lie out of this one Princess Egghead.
You know Spike going to blame himself some how. He going to feel it's all his fault and could see him try to make himself out as the one at fault to ember's father to s ve Rarity and her.
Why....because loves makes us stupid, and Spike is too noble.
technically yeah a contingent of guards and luna and/or celestia would probably have arrived through half of this, and reminded ash he can't just take people whenever he pleases, preferably at the end of a war hammer.