What happens if my little ponies landed in summoner's rift? this is a crossover between mlp fim and LOL. This is my first story so constructive criticism is always welcome.
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i'll probably never write a story. XP
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Ok, for one, grammar is... Meh. I'm no grammar Nazi but some of it can get a good tunning.
As for the story, you're attacking a pretty huge beast on your first attempt. Let me take the aggro, I can tank it with Rammus (LoL)
Ok honestly, you will need help for this and I'm here to do so.
752019 Thanks! If you like i can add ramus to the story, i really need ideas on some champions too! Any help is definetly welcome!
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I only give ideas. That's what I do. I'm not going to tell you what to do, only give you ideas to get you mind working for chapters.
Hey! Thanks for reading this chapter, hopefully we get to the actual game soon! Leave some suggestions and maybe I'll use them!
Ok, if RD is going to have a skill resembling Xerath's ULT, it needs to be a lot less powerful.
Lol, I swear if Skarner and Taric is in there, Rarity will flip out. Gem Knight and and Living crystal scorpion, she'd be going nuts over that.
760080 lol yeah,
what's xerath's ulti again?
what are the odds of me finding an LOL and mlp crossover
i thought none
775053yeah, that's the reason i wanted to write one! oh and hi mordekaiser! too bad this can only be updated once per two weeks though.
of course she gets first blood...
Twilight VS Malzhar at mid lol
we already got hecarim and soraka, i think we're good
835653 I WANT MOARXP
Oh Dang it when I read summoner's rift I thought it was gonna be about Klarth F Lester [still good story though]
You need to structure the text better. This is such a mess I can't tell who's talking or what's going on. Aside from that, Ahri is not portrayed as such. Go on the role play forums of League of legends to learn about her character and correct her ASAP.
That is all.
1533015 I'll most certainly be trying to structure my words better, but honestly, This is how i'm depicting ahri and i'm gonna stick with it, the league states that she was a fox demon and i have seen enough chinese dramas to noe how they act. But thanks for the criticisim.
1412931 THANKS! I think