"Hi!" OK, good start. "My name is Sarah, I'm a 22 year old student. Um... I've never done anything of note... I don't have any particular talents except drawing stuff. And I like ponies. I used to think that they were boring, and then something happened that changed my mind forever. I'm here to tell you a story. There have been similar cases with other people. This is MY story. And it all started with a cardboard box...".
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I like your story, but your formatting's weird in that half the sentence gets cut off.
7022425 Thanks for your feedback. I really appreciate it.
Sorry about the weird formatting, I'm not sure if I fixed the problem you're talking about but I did notice that some of the sentences would sometimes continue on the line below when there was plenty of room. Is that what you're talking about? If not, can you tell me more specifically what you're referring to please? I'd really appreciate it.
I'm glad you like the story.
World Runner
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formatting is still off for me as well so I dont think you fixed it
8450124
Welp, thanks for letting me know. 
I thought I had. *sigh*
8450124
Fixed now, I hope. This is the second time I've fixed this (at least I remember having this issue once already). I really don't know what went wrong.
8450139
it looks like it i will keep a eye out just on case some sentences go rouge
8450421
Thanks. I appreciate that.
I'll try to check before publishing from now on though.
I get the feeling that Applejack still has her adult mind
8450479
An interesting observation. You're quite perceptive. :) It's just that I can't imagine AJ as anything else but a serious pony, even as a filly. :)
8450506
understandable but I look forward to when she learns about the show
8450509
I have a little idea already for how that's going to go. But I won't say anything obviously.
I'm glad you're enjoying this enough too look forward to future chapters.
8450512
welcome and don't be afraid to hit me up if you need help
8450514
Thanks.
says it was updated but i dont see a new chapter i wonder what updated