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PhilosopherPony3344
Just a simple guy trying to live in this crazy world.
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Just got done reading this can't wait for the next chapter. Very interesting story.
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Thank you. I was afraid people wouldn't like it or find something wrong grammatically. I've tried to write this chapter as well as I could and as clearly as I could. Well, I guess that is all I have to say. thanks for reading.
If this is clop it needs the sex tag.
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It is not clop. Where in the hell did you get that idea?
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I think they just got confused because of the mature tag since it's typically only used for clop and/or gore. Speaking of which, why is this mature?
Also, the story is good so far, I like the idea of Spike keeping the ability to talk. ^^ There are a few grammatical errors, sometimes it goes from past to present tense, and some paragraphs are really long, but other than that it's really good! Oh, and trust me when I say compared to some people, your grammar looks as perfect as [insert your favorite person, place, or thing here].
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Well, the reason why I choose the "mature" tag was because of some mature themes such as drug references, angst, some sex mention. I plan on editing this chapter soon due to some feedback I got from someone else I have shown the story to. He gave some good points and told me to add a bit of feeling to some of the things I've talked about.
So far, comments have been fairly decent. Haven't had any, well, "troll" comments. However, even if I were to receive such comments, oh well. That is the nature of the internet, or putting your ideas out there. Be it in book form, movie form, ect. Not everyone is going to like your stuff. Some may even tear it apart by reviewing it.
As for the grammar being "as perfect as [insert your favorite person, place, or thing here]", there is a simple reason for that; I read a grammar book so I made sure I was able to write well grammatically and spelling words right. I have seen too many people make themselves look like idiots online and in real life because they had crappy grammar and spelling.
I hope to write a good enough story that people will like. Now, I'm not sure where this story will go, mind you. I do have a fairly good idea where to take it. We will just have to see where this goes. Again, I appreciate you taking the time to read my fic.
7191134 Thank you. I appreciate the comment on here and in Twitter DMs. I'll be honest, I don't really think I'm a very good writer. I've written fics before on fanfiction.net (not advertising, I swear!). My stories on there were mostly having to do with Kim Possible, Danny Phantom, and others I can't really remember right now.
The stories I used to write on ff.net were dark, I mean really dark and twisted. The paragraphs were more detailed and full of grammatical errors as is usually the case with longer works. Looking back at that time I noticed I was, well, I guess you could say; edgy, emo, goth, or whatever. Though I don't think negative emotions and writing dark and twisted stories is reserved for those type of people alone. Could be wrong, of course.
I'm not sure where I'm taking this story either, but I do have some ideas that I won't discuss here because I want to surprise, of course. I find myself having trouble working on chapter one. I can't seem to describe what I see in my mind's eye. However, I'm reading as a way to remedy this.
I'm currently reading "Supernatural: Meetings with the ancient teachers of mankind" by Graham Hancock. I don't remember much from the book yet. I do remember somethings but not enough to describe it well enough. But what I got so far is Graham Hancock seems to be making the argument that our ancestors had otherworldly guides and teachers from realms beyond this one. Sounds crazy, I know. But if you were to look into it, I mean really look into it, it sounds legit.
Now, as you've mentioned in the prologue of your fic, magic is pretty much gone from the world. Replaced by reliable science. Know I am not knocking science. Hell, I love science; I love learning about stars and planets, about physics, about math. I seek knowledge in general. I guess I'm like Twilight in a lot of ways. The human one. I'm not really that social. I would rather watch a movie or read a book or play a game than being around people. I do have some friends I talk to. I have this one friend I've known for 20 years.
Yes, 20 years. That basically means we are married. But getting serious, I'm glad to have him in my life for so long. He is a good person but in a bad spot financially. He is always there when I need to talk to him and I as well. I first meet him in 1996 during my time in elementary school and we've been friends ever since.
Anyway, I think I've said enough. I'm glad you liked the story so far. I hope to work on chapter 1 more soon.