Heh cute, will we be seeing anymore?

6983926 Yes this is the first of 4 clopfics. Bear in mind I've never written one before so they won't be star grade like my other two stories.

I really enjoyed this, it was cute. But maybe on the next one you can keep it at a slower pace. Other than that it was amazing

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You two should check my blog I'm about to update it.

6984674 and ya that was my fear but since this was my first crack at a clopfic i think I did pretty good.

and you have an amazing paying job working for the princess as the first human member of her royal guard.

Needs "Human" tag.

6985103 Thanks for the heads up

Speed clop Lvl 9

6985272 Ya this was my first clop story so I'm gonna work on my pacing in the next clopfic. The longer the better.

6985059 You did do good, hope theirs gonna be more in the future.

6985741 oh trust me there is
For now I'm on hiatus for a few weeks so i can brainstorm.

That was pretty good Well done

On top of all that you are also dating one of the most powerful Alicorns in Ponyville.

This sentence should be most powerful Alicorns in Equestria since Twilight is the only Alicorn in Ponyville.

Still have a like and a fave.

I loved it

Would love to see a complete story fic of the character's arrival in Equestria and the development of his relationship with Twilight...

Make it happen pls!