Arriving as foreigners in Equestria, a group of 8 friends must survive in this new, strangely colorful, land. After some weeks, they learn that they were summoned by Princess Celestia herself. They head to Canterlot to ask her about it, but receive terrible news: the Princesses are missing. And they instructed the guards to hand over control of the kingdom to the same group. Now, with the help of the remaining 5 Elements of Harmony, they must find a way to survive, and keep the kingdom alive, all the while searching for the Princesses. As time goes on, new relationships are formed, while other relationships are strained. Equestria nearly collapses, and fighting goes on around the nation. This group of friends must fight to stay together and to save everypony else. Can they find the Princesses in time to save Equestria? Or will the nation fall to the enemy?
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Cover art was made by me.
If you disliked my story, please tell me why! I want to make my story better for you guys!!! Any advice you have or any things you want to be changed, please tell me!!!!!
Great story so far keep up the good work
buuuuut can you possibly try to make the chapters longer?
buut apart from that it's great and I love it so far!!
Because I kinda feel like it ends too quickly
>>Lukeman2001
Thanks for the advice! Details are something I'm focusing on right now, but you're right. I'll see what I can do for the next chapter! Thanks again!
I kind of hit writer's block here. It's strange to have it hit me really quickly like this.
However, if I can make up any new ideas, I will certainly add it to the story.
Thanks for sticking around!