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Thousands of years ago there was a group that travelled across the Equestria with one goal in mind: "Make Equestria a better place for everyone." They were the keepers of The Elements of Harmony. But why didn't they succeed? What separated once good friends? Why did they abandon their duty and threw away the elements?

This is their story, the story about kindness, laughter, honesty, generosity, loyalty and magic and their fall into the darkness.

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I love it!!!Very creative!!

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6955831 Im your biggest fan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:heart:

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Really? But I've only started 2 stories, that's hardly enough to evaluate someone's skills? Maybe you should wait a bit and see whether my work is good enough or not, it's hard to tell how good or bad I am just from a few chapters. :)

That was a great first chapter, this story got some great potential and i'm eagerly waiting for more!
how did you come up with this idea? :pinkiesmile:

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Thanks,
I'm not really sure how I got the idea. I just thought one day: "What if mlp villains were good before and even had the same role as mane 6 but something went wrong?" and since pretty much every villain appeared thousand years ago it made me think what exactly happened back then? (must've been crazy year or something XD )

The only problem is, I can't really finish the story until we get one more villain in mlp that I can work with. (currently there are only 5: Chrysalis, Sombra, Tirek -he might be a bit of a problem- , Nightmare moon and Discord) Starlight and Sunset aren't really villains and don't fit with others, I can't really think what to do with The Dazzlings and all other villains are minor villains (only for one or two episodes)

I'll try to update as often as possible but the story won't be finished until one more villain shows up.

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I see your problem with the odd numbers. In my personal opinion i don’t think the Sirens would fit in. (Never thought I would say that). However they can still be used. Sense they caused so much conflicts (according to Rainbow rocks at least).

The minor villans would not really make sense if the time setting is before celestia and luna got the elements to fight discord.

However i belive you can make it work :twilightsmile:

Good luck! :twilightsheepish:

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I thought about using them in the story but I still need to figure out what I want to use them for :D

I hope we get some good villains in season 6 (I wish they would add Grogar)

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