When a strange white light starts kidnapping students from Canterlot high and pulling them through the portal to Equestria, Twilight and her human friends try to solve it before even more people and ponies get captured. Yet it's not as simple when a romance begins to blossom between a certain rainbow haired girl and both purple and pink haired girls. With both worlds at stake, along with three hearts, who will Rainbow choose and will she be able to dispel this encroaching evil? A Rainbow Dash centered story Twidash/Flutterdash
I don't see any crippling problems yet. Although I never did understand why some authors choose to include their username in the author's note.
6949428 I used it because this is the first chapter of my first story :) (and also because my original name was taken so I had to include the number so I wanted to put it without the number somewhere :P)
Few typos, but it's interesting so far.
I like the part where flash screams out of pain
This is my first rainbowsparkle and flutterdash fanfic I like please write more
Uh oh, where did the mirror pull Pinkie?
uh why was tiwlight in her old library tree home and not her castle
6993062 Let's just say that it... uh... somehow survived the Tirek battle? (I totally forgot about the whole castle thing when writing about this tbh)
rip rare
I think discord might be behind this probably as a prank.
Please continue asap,I wuv this fanfic :3
PLEASE Continue this story! I love it !!!!!
...am I the only one hoping to see my FlutterTwiDash OT3 invoked here? Yes, no maybe so? Oh well, at least Flash got hurt. You can never go wrong with hurting Flash. It's always the appropriate thing to do regardless of the situation. When in doubt beat the ever-loving crap out of Flash Sentry. That's my motto and it's never failed me yet.