Chapter 4? Where is chapter 3?

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Nah, I just forgot that I can't do the auto-titling because I had a prologue. So this is chapter 3, don't worry. My bad everyone!

Good chapter, but I was disappointed when they walked in on Rainbow and she WASN'T furiously masturbating to the Wonderbolts race. It just didn't match her character at all.

well, you redeemed yourself, although I know crazy stuff happens in the womb so you better not be messing with us. I'm also not entirely ruling out a unicorn as horns could develop later. Although I guess a doctor would know when it would develop.

7237843 really, she's a Wonderbolt now and so she won't do that.

I can't wait till the next chapter. This is a very touching story, and has a really good premise.

Forget the parents. How is Rainbow going to take the news?

No centaurs? {Sigh}, oh well.
I think Will needs to have his family over to Equestria for a vacation. Get them all used to talking ponies. Introduce them to Scootaloo's parents, and Rainbow's,(which would either go really well, or really badly), and then, right before they leave, have all of the families over to Sugarcube Corner where Pinkie will throw a 'guess who's pregnant?' party.

Nice chapter! Looking forward to the next!
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*<>* ...lol rainbow hears the news ...spazes out ...dashes off ...then has realization that she also wants a foal of her own ....comes back drunk as Tartarus and has her way with Will...

Nice to see Renbuw Desh again, but I have this nagging feeling at the back of my head that says she's going to be put in a situation where she'll be portrayed as a bad influence/ burden on the couple.

Y'know, the kind of gal that keeps on ribbing her pregnant friend to drink and have a "bit of fun" before life gets boring.
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Or that she'll have a large amount of trouble conforming to new the set of rules and responsibilities that come with living around a baby/ having one.

No flying around the house.

No teaching the earth pony foal how to fly.

No snakes on the plane.

The micro wave is not a suitable crib.

I've only read the plot summary, but Scootaloo is an adult in this story, right?

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She totally would. She'd just already finished by the time they got home.

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Thankya kindly!

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Find out next time on Rainbow Ball Z!

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Well, to be fair, Rainbow is a bit older than she is in the show, so I like to think she's matured a little bit. She may not always show it *cough*TFaR*cough* but I guess we'll just have to see how she takes it.

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Sorry, missed yours!
There definitely won't be centaurs in this story. If I ever wanted to do hybrid creatures, I'd do satyrs (check the tag 'satyr' on derpibooru for instances of what I mean). And that would certainly be one interesting way to tell the prospective grandparents! We'll have to see how they go about it though.

7238581 I didn't think of that.

for you sir if I didn't already give your first story one
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So are we just forgetting the side story with Rumble?

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From the description of The Things We Do for Love:

An alternate universe (non-canon) side story of To Find a Rainbow.

>(non-canon)

I need to keep this comment copy/pasted somewhere with as often as I get asked it.

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I see why I was confused now, I'm stupid.

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Don't feel too bad, several people have missed that.

the three primary species of Equestrian pony typically have between 950 and 1250 thaums.”

And Twilight has over 9000

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I kinda feel like I’m in a sci-fi/horror flick where the mare has a monster parasite thing growing inside her just waiting to burst open her stomach and eat her alive.”

Will, are you sure that's Scoots and not Sigourney Weaver?

Minor inconsistency:

I’ll be your doctor for the next eleven or so months

You acknowledge that Scoots is already two months along, and given that a horse takes eleven months to develop, it contradicts what you say further down that Scoots has nine months left. Call it being nitpicky, but it might be an idea to change it.

Also, I'm thinking since Will has had in increase of 'thaums', that he's become more... receptive/fertile for Scoots. The increase of magical energies within him could have altered his DNA/his sperm to be compatible with Scoots.

I really like the direction this story is going.

Can't wait for the reaction of RD, when they break her the news!

Keep your good work up!

Cheers
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Author's Note:
As a random bit of trivia, Dr. Pearl's first name is Pink. Make of that what you will.

So, she's a clitoris

wow this hole story is just awesome I love it.
I can see ware you (JeremyStorm and team) are trying for a more slice of life story line and you are ding a perfect job with it.
I just cant say enough good bout this story.
but I am sad to say I see one problem we need more story ok to be honest even hurry a story you must obey your muse if you try to force it well it just gets ugly.

I'm more interested in seeing how Rainbow takes the news than any of the parents. It'll be another reminder of what she's had to give up to be a Wonderbolt. Will's going to end up doing most of the raising in the end I think; I see him strapping the foal to his back while he works in the fields, like from those old Japanese movies.

Something tells me going back through the portal could be harmful to Will.

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Well after how Dashie reacted to Will kissed Scootaloo back in Cloudsdale I wouldn't be surprised at all.
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Oh I was thinking about that alternative universe story too, not to mention that it played about in the same time as this one. Well if this all thing would happening in that alternative universe than it would sure make things about at least 20% more complicated.
For example it would be very odd for Rumble that she only joined to them -which I believe was about a month after Scootaloo's heat period - and now a new pony is coming again.

Anyway I think the magic of love between Scootaloo and will might play some role in Will's magical adaptation and that could be also the reason for the big number that the doctor registered.
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...or Written Cript will be looking after the baby nex to his and Carrot's too. Talking about Carrot I could see her face when she founds out that she was right about Scootaloo's pregnancy even she meant that to be a joke. Too bad she would hide her true reaction as she always do.

It's quite possible that Rainbow Dash will feel regret for she gave up Will but that was a tough decision We can't forget that the other reason she turned down Scootaloo's offer back than outher than her dream was to be the part of the Wonderbolts that she still looked at Scootaloo as a filly.

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Hey, that's Dr. Clitoris.
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7239397 Does that mean that she's like super fertile? Like she can get pregger even outside of her heat cycle?

7239390 I can't believe it took me so long to notice that this sequel had started. Seriously if I hadn't been suggesting To Find a Rainbow to a friend and he hadn't asked me for a link, I would have never seen the side of the screen with the word sequel and found this story. Thank you for bringing back this story it's been a while since I've had a good read and your stories are always masterpieces.

Btw I know Scootaloo and Will are both too nice but I expect at least one of the 3 parents or even Will's parents to want to sue Dr. Stable for this. I know in one pov it really wasn't his fault since he didn't knew Will was absorbing magic but still, from an agry parent pov they won't care and will want to sue the incompetent sorry excuse for a doctor that gave their child a wrong diagnostic that was directly responsible for this unplanned pregnancy.
Hope you consider mentioning this if only as a comment that gets dismissed immediately

7290681 The good thing about the portal is stable and open that Will can go home to his world to buy a few "bags" of condoms before Scootaloo's next heat, so they can enjoy it rutting like wild animals as long as the condom don't beaks.

When the next chapter

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It gets pushed back another month every time I'm asked.

And like Game of Thrones, I'm completely hooked on this series!!
I'm looking forward to how Rainbow will react to this development!!!

There's a rainbow in the room, what shananagins will ensue?

7323474 and now we wait for eternity......

7323474 are u serious??

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No, of course not! Just unfortunate writer's block.

7384078 bruh dont Fucking!! do that....

7384078 but dude.... When is the next 1 tho??

So... Whatever happened to naming the sequel 'To Find A Rainbow 2: Electric Scootaloo'?

7392939 I like you, you're funny.

7459236 That's a first.

7459839 Well, "The Electric Boogaloo" is a running gag in The Good HiE List's Friday Night Streams and voice channels. I find it immensely funny because of that.

7460373 He mentioned it in the last few chapter's comments of To Find a Rainbow that he was thinking of naming the sequel as such.

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"Dead or alive, you are ovulating with me!"

Oh hay look, a sequel. But it's not finished, eep!

Ok here's how this is gonna go. I'm gonna start reading. And I'm gonna really really hope it isn't abandoned like so many of the good unfinished ones have been here.

Okie?

Edit: Wait, that's where it stops right now? Noooooooo!

7541955 I know what you mean you find a damn good story and then it is never finished its so annoying!