Where's Rainbow Dash? [Choose your own path]

After she was rejected by the Wonderbolts for no reason, Rainbow went missing. Her best friends are panicking and searching all over Equestria for her. Will they find her? CHOOSE YOUR OWN PATH story.

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Ian_Okazaki

Ian_Okazaki #1 · Jun 9th, 2012 · · · She's missing! ·

creating a choose your path is one of the hardest forms of writing.

NastyMaggots

NastyMaggots #2 · Jun 10th, 2012 · · · She's missing! ·

meh.

FireFlash13231

FireFlash13231 #3 · Jun 10th, 2012 · · · She's missing! ·

5 dislikes only because theres only one chapter. ill leave you a like for your effort and because i thought it was a good start. keep trying, not everypony has a good reaction to their work.

SteelEagle

SteelEagle #4 · Jun 10th, 2012 · · · She's missing! ·

It's got potential. Keep it up!

Angel_Blaze

Angel_Blaze #5 · Jun 10th, 2012 · · · She's missing! ·

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Yeah, I know. I just bought a book today that was a Choose your path story, and it inspired me to write one too. ^o^ It's really hard.

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I understand. :p

722849
Thanks. ^^

723577
Naw. You're scaring her!

Ian_Okazaki

Ian_Okazaki #6 · Jun 10th, 2012 · · · She's missing! ·

723932 Well now that I know that you had a reason to write this I'll support you from here on.

Angel_Blaze

Angel_Blaze #7 · Jun 10th, 2012 · · · She's missing! ·

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D'aww, thanks!

Starlight Fire

Starlight Fire #8 · Jun 10th, 2012 · · · She's missing! ·

Wiki on the owl. Name of cat is Opalescence.

Could do with some polishing here and there, but keep going! I want to know what happens next. I must know. I must. I MUST!

Angel_Blaze

Angel_Blaze #9 · Jun 10th, 2012 · · · She's missing! ·

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Lol, I know. I'm not much of a writer, but I thought I'd give it a try. And thanks, the cat has a long name. >:I

rainbowdashfan3353

rainbowdashfan3353 #10 · Jun 11th, 2012 · · · She's missing! ·

angel blaze please right another chapter cause i hate when the story is starting to get all intense and then when the goo part is about to come the first chapter is done pleaaasee please i need to know what happens next!!!