• Published 9th Jun 2012
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Where's Rainbow Dash? [Choose your own path] - Angel_Blaze



Rainbow Dash went missing after she was rejected by the Wonderbolts. Choose your own path!

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She's missing!

She's missing!
Chapter/part 1


Ranbow dash blinked; there was an envelope on her front porch that had the Wonderbolt's colors blue and yellow, along with their mark. Wait. Wonderbolts?

She let out a squeal, "Omigoshomigoshomigoshomigosh!" she picked up the envelope quickly with her teeth and rush inside, flopping on her cough and setting it down on her table. Dash carefully opened it, not wanting to rip the envelope. Once she reached the paper inside, she leaned back and began to read:

Dear Miss Rainbow Dash,

We are totally amazed by your flying talents and your incredible Sonic Rainboom. You did an amazing job at the auditions but us, the Wonderbolts aren't looking for someone with skills like you. Since Spitfire has been lacking off, we fired her sadly. We were looking for a pegasus with that has the same "leadership ability" as Spitfire.

Sincerely,
The Wonderbolts

By the time Rainbow Dash finished reading the letter, the paper was drenched with her tears. They didn't accept her just because she was the leader type? For Celestia's cake, she could do A SONIC RAINBOOM. Once thought to be only a myth. She doubted that even Princess Luna or Princes Celestia could do something like that. She began to slap herself, trying to wake herself from this nightmare.

Sadly, she finally gave up and tore the note to pieces and slowly fly to the front porch. She needed fresh air, badly. Once Dash got to the porch and sat down she cried out to the sky, "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"

Go to NUMBER 2 to know what Fluttershy does when she hears Rainbow.
Go to NUMBER 3 to know what Twilight Sparkle does.
4 for Apple Jack.
5 for Rarity.
6 for Pinkie Pie


#2

Fluttershy dodged as Angel Bunny threw a bowl of chicken noodle soap at her, which landed and splattered all over the wall. She had tried every single food she knew but Angel just wouldn't eat. Finally she lost her temper and roared at Angel Bunny, "YOU BETTER EAT THAT OFF THE WALL." she gave him the little bunny the death stare and it whimpered and scampered off towards the mess and began licking it off the wall.

"That's better." she said back to her usual self, not noticing all the other animals had gone back to their homes when she roared.

Then Fluttershy heard a cry that sounded like RD, "Huh? Is that Rainbow Dash? I-I better go check on her," The yellow pegasus turned to the white bunny who was licking the wall,"Angel Bunny can you stay home by yourself? Wait, of course you can." she said happily and turned to leave.

She slowly, yet quickly followed the sound to see her other best friends around her at Rainbow Dash's porch, "Are you okay Rainbow?" they all asked at the exact same time.


#3

"Finally! We finished cleaning up the library. Aren't you tired Spike?" Twilight Sparkle turned to ask him. His eyes were drooping and he leaned over towards her.

"Ya.. I'm tired." he yawned.

She giggled, "Why don't you go to sleep."

Spike turned and began to walk up the stairs of the library, "Ya... that sounds like a good idea.." he mumbled before collapsing on it. Twilight Sparkle turned to see him asleep on the stairs.

She chuckled a bit and picked him up and put him to bed, "I think it's a better idea to sleep in your bed than on the stairs. It'd be more... comfortable." then she heard a cry that sounded like Dash. She looked at her other assistant (A/N : Can't spell the owl's name xD) and then spoke to him, "You can mange alone right?"

The owl nodded and flew back to it's stand. Twilight was about to cast a cloud-walking spell on herself when Applejack, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie burst through her door.

"Why are you here?!" Twi screamed as soon as they ran in. They told her about Rainbow Dash's cry.

She nodded, "Yeah I heard it too. Perhaps all of Ponyville heard. I bet Fluttershy's already on her way."

Pinkie Pie jumped up and down, messing up the cupcakes in a plastic box that was held tightly in her mouth, "I bet she's screaming cause she ran out of cupcakes! That's why I'm bringing more!" she exclaimed, the box slipping out of her mouth and landed on the ground. The box opened and they spilled out, staining the floor with several different colors.

Twilight face-hoofed, "And I just cleaned the library." Her horn lit and a purple aurora got a washcloth and she began to clean it.

Rarity spoke up, "Come on! We have to hurry right?" Apple Jack nodded.

"Ya, we came all ta way here fer ya ta cast teh cloud-walkin' spell on us." Twilight Sparkle looked up, "Great timing. I was gonna cast it on myself." she stopped cleaning and began to cast the spell on all four of them.

"Off we go now! We can't let Dashie wait for cupcakes!" Pinkie Pie exclaimed, picking up the one perfect cupcake that wasn't splattered all over the ground.

They appeared at RD's porch and they all asked at the same time, "Are you okay Rainbow?"


#4

Apple Jack began to buck the apples on the trees. Fall had just arrived, the perfect time for bucking apples. She noticed Big Macintosh walk out of the barn, "Howdy Big Mac. Ya'll late fer teh buckin'. I already gotten started couple hours ago."

"Eeeyup. I know that." he replied simply and began to help Apple Jack buck. Although he was going super slow.. as usual. Apple Jack bit her lip. Big Mac never really talked. Sometimes she wished that she could have a normal conversation with him.

Apple Jack slammed a tree with her hind legs, "Ya'll gonna have ta do mah chores today. I got buckin' first." She heard him groan and they kept bucking apples in silence. Until they heard a cry, most likely coming from Rainbow. Apple Jack was the first to notice who it was.

"Ya'll gonna have to finish ta bucking. RD needs some help." AJ said quickly and took off, leaving Big Mac talking to no one, "Eeeyup."

Apple Jack bumped into Pinkie Pie who was holding a ton of cupcakes in a plastic box that was tightly clamped in her jaws. Pinkie turned to look at AJ, "Oh hi Apple Jack!" she exclaimed, almost dropping the cupcakes.

She began to ramble on, "Did ja hear Dashie? 'Cause I did! I really did! Didja? Huh, didja? She was so loud I bet everypony in Equestria could hear her! She was like this!" Pinkie Pie died a fail shocked face and screamed out not as loud as RD, "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I don't think it's possible to scream that loud? Is it? Huh, is it? AJ, have you ever screamed that loud! Wait, you don't scream right? Maybe you do! I don't scream. I don't scream at all. Unless a pony breaks a Pinkie Promise, but that'll never happen, right?!"

Apple Jack fell to the ground and covered her ears, "Nooo!" she shouted, "Stop that! Stop talking!" she begged and Pinkie looked at her weirdly, "Okay." she put down the cupcakes hard and zipped her lips and picked up the cupcakes once more.

"Finally..." AJ sighed and got up and began to walk with Pinkie Pie followed her like a little filly following her mother. She closed her eyes and bumped into something. Wait not something... It was somepony! Her eyes flashed opened to find that she had bumped into Rarity.

Rarity turned around to see that the orange pony had bumped into her bottom, "Apple Jack!" she shouted, "What in Equestria are you doing?!"

Apple Jack scratched her head, "Mighty sorry. I was gonna visit Twi. I heard RD scream." she explained.

"I did too! And I was going to go to her's too." Rarity replied, walking forward with the other two following her. The two broke into a run and burst through Twilight's door.

"Why are you here?!" Twi screamed as soon as they ran in. They told her about Rainbow Dash's cry.

She nodded, "Yeah I heard it too. Perhaps all of Ponyville heard. I bet Fluttershy's already on her way."

Pinkie Pie jumped up and down, messing up the cupcakes in a plastic box that was held tightly in her mouth, "I bet she's screaming cause she ran out of cupcakes! That's why I'm bringing more!" she exclaimed, the box slipping out of her mouth and landed on the ground. The box opened and they spilled out, staining the floor with several different colors.

Twilight face-hoofed, "And I just cleaned the library." Her horn lit and a purple aurora got a washcloth and she began to clean it.

Rarity spoke up, "Come on! We have to hurry right?" Apple Jack nodded.

"Ya, we came all ta way here fer ya ta cast teh cloud-walkin' spell on us." Twilight Sparkle looked up, "Great timing. I was gonna cast it on myself." she stopped cleaning and began to cast the spell on all four of them.

"Off we go now! We can't let Dashie wait for cupcakes!" Pinkie Pie exclaimed, picking up the one perfect cupcake that wasn't splattered all over the ground.

They appeared at Dash's front porch, "Are you okay Rainbow?" they all asked at the same time.


#5

Rarity admired her newest dress, "This is my most absolutely best dress I ever made!" she squealed at her new design. After hours of hard work the dress was worth it.

Then she heard the scream, "..Was that Rainbow Dash?" she asked her cat (A/N : Forgot her name too XD), then she thought for a bit, "Well of course it was her!" she exclaimed and dashed out the door, "There's something wrong with Rainbow Dash!"

While walking, she felt something bump into her backside. Turning to see who had bumped into her, she noticed an orange pony, "Apple Jack!" she shouted, "What in Equestria are you doing?!

She scratched her head, "Mighty sorry. I was gonna visit Twi. I heard RD scream."

"Finally..." AJ sighed and got up and began to walk with Pinkie Pie followed her like a little filly following her mother. She closed her eyes and bumped into something. Wait not something... It was somepony! Her eyes flashed opened to find that she had bumped into Rarity.

Rarity turned around to see that the orange pony had bumped into her bottom, "Apple Jack!" she shouted, "What in Equestria are you doing?!"

Apple Jack scratched her head, "Mighty sorry. I was gonna visit Twi. I heard RD scream." she explained.

"I did too! And I was going to go to her's too." Rarity replied, walking forward with the other two following her. The two broke into a run and burst through Twilight's door.

"Why are you here?!" Twi screamed as soon as they ran in. They told her about Rainbow Dash's cry.

She nodded, "Yeah I heard it too. Perhaps all of Ponyville heard. I bet Fluttershy's already on her way."

Pinkie Pie jumped up and down, messing up the cupcakes in a plastic box that was held tightly in her mouth, "I bet she's screaming cause she ran out of cupcakes! That's why I'm bringing more!" she exclaimed, the box slipping out of her mouth and landed on the ground. The box opened and they spilled out, staining the floor with several different colors.

Twilight face-hoofed, "And I just cleaned the library." Her horn lit and a purple aurora got a washcloth and she began to clean it.

Rarity spoke up, "Come on! We have to hurry right?" Apple Jack nodded.

"Ya, we came all ta way here fer ya ta cast teh cloud-walkin' spell on us." Twilight Sparkle looked up, "Great timing. I was gonna cast it on myself." she stopped cleaning and began to cast the spell on all four of them.

"Off we go now! We can't let Dashie wait for cupcakes!" Pinkie Pie exclaimed, picking up the one perfect cupcake that wasn't splattered all over the ground.

They appeared at Dash's front porch, "Are you okay Rainbow?" they all asked at the same time.


#6

Pinkie Pie was eating a bunch of sweets when she heard a scream that sounded like RD, "Dashie's in trouble! She ran out of cupcakes!" she cried out and ran to the counter and pulled out a plastic box of different flavored cupcakes. She dashed out of her door.

Pinkie Pie felt someone bump into her, "Huh?" Pinkie turned to look at AJ, "Oh hi Apple Jack!" she exclaimed, almost dropping the cupcakes.

She began to ramble on, "Did ja hear Dashie? 'Cause I did! I really did! Didja? Huh, didja? She was so loud I bet everypony in Equestria could hear her! She was like this!" Pinkie Pie died a fail shocked face and screamed out not as loud as RD, "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I don't think it's possible to scream that loud? Is it? Huh, is it? AJ, have you ever screamed that loud! Wait, you don't scream right? Maybe you do! I don't scream. I don't scream at all. Unless a pony breaks a Pinkie Promise, but that'll never happen, right?!"

Apple Jack fell to the ground and covered her ears, "Nooo!" she shouted, "Stop that! Stop talking!" she begged and Pinkie looked at her weirdly, "Okay." she put down the cupcakes hard and zipped her lips and picked up the cupcakes once more.

"Finally..." AJ sighed and got up and began to walk with Pinkie Pie followed her like a little filly following her mother. She closed her eyes and bumped into something. Wait not something... It was somepony! Her eyes flashed opened to find that she had bumped into Rarity.

Rarity turned around to see that the orange pony had bumped into her bottom, "Apple Jack!" she shouted, "What in Equestria are you doing?!"

Apple Jack scratched her head, "Mighty sorry. I was gonna visit Twi. I heard RD scream." she explained.

"I did too! And I was going to go to her's too." Rarity replied, walking forward with the other two following her. The two broke into a run and burst through Twilight's door.

"Why are you here?!" Twi screamed as soon as they ran in. They told her about Rainbow Dash's cry.

She nodded, "Yeah I heard it too. Perhaps all of Ponyville heard. I bet Fluttershy's already on her way."

Pinkie Pie jumped up and down, messing up the cupcakes in a plastic box that was held tightly in her mouth, "I bet she's screaming cause she ran out of cupcakes! That's why I'm bringing more!" she exclaimed, the box slipping out of her mouth and landed on the ground. The box opened and they spilled out, staining the floor with several different colors.

Twilight face-hoofed, "And I just cleaned the library." Her horn lit and a purple aurora got a washcloth and she began to clean it.

Rarity spoke up, "Come on! We have to hurry right?" Apple Jack nodded.

"Ya, we came all ta way here fer ya ta cast teh cloud-walkin' spell on us." Twilight Sparkle looked up, "Great timing. I was gonna cast it on myself." she stopped cleaning and began to cast the spell on all four of them.

"Off we go now! We can't let Dashie wait for cupcakes!" Pinkie Pie exclaimed, picking up the one perfect cupcake that wasn't splattered all over the ground.

They appeared at Dash's front porch, "Are you okay Rainbow?" they all asked at the same time.


ALL

"Are you okay Rainbow?" they asked. But when they looked up, the rainbow-haired mane mare was gone.

Comments ( 16 )

creating a choose your path is one of the hardest forms of writing.

5 dislikes only because theres only one chapter. ill leave you a like for your effort and because i thought it was a good start. keep trying, not everypony has a good reaction to their work.

It's got potential. Keep it up!

722684
Yeah, I know. I just bought a book today that was a Choose your path story, and it inspired me to write one too. ^o^ It's really hard.

722835
I understand. :p

722849
Thanks. ^^

723577
Naw. You're scaring her!

723932 Well now that I know that you had a reason to write this I'll support you from here on.

Wiki on the owl. Name of cat is Opalescence.

Could do with some polishing here and there, but keep going! I want to know what happens next. I must know. I must. I MUST! :duck:

724440
Lol, I know. I'm not much of a writer, but I thought I'd give it a try. And thanks, the cat has a long name. >:I

angel blaze please right another chapter cause i hate when the story is starting to get all intense and then when the goo part is about to come the first chapter is done pleaaasee please i need to know what happens next!!!:flutterrage:

729260
Lol, I will, but I can't think at the middle of the night. I'll get started on it right when I wake up. ^^

LOVE IT please keep writing!!!:twilightsmile:

729626 its been 2 weeks now when:ajbemused:!?

Next one?

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