Dark Façade, he's poor, a bit lost, and doesn't shave. Things aren't looking up for him either, winter's coming, and it's gonna be cold. He lives day to day, managing life best he can, and he has a profanity issue, it's not helping either.
Assassin's Creed Crossover
Comedy Tag: Just in case I decide to crack any jokes. Probably a few.
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What does AC stand for?Is it assassin's creed?
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Yes, it stands for Assassin's Creed.
I was crying tears of blood by the end of the first paragraph. Yet I continued.
By the fifth paragraph I was dead. Thanks a lot.
But seriously, here's some criticism. Go learn how to make a fucking character before you write stories.
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I didn't have a title for the fic, and unnamed fic #21 wasn't working for me, because, obvious reasons. Character wise, I did it mostly indirectly for the first chapter on purpose the next chapters are to be more character development. And introduce our first antagonist...
6833301 Yes, but learn to make CONSISTENT DIALOGUE. Like, don't have your character swearing at his doorknob one moment, and talking like Shakespeare the next. Why? Because it feels incredibly choppy, ruins the mood, and just generally confuses the hell out of everyone.
Also, let me think of some titles for you, Mr. Lazy Writer:
Assassin's Pony
The Tale of Dark Façade
Brotherhood
Poorly Written Story
Also, don't call your character "homeless". You clearly state that he lives in an apartment that he's clearly been in for a while.
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No hard feelings aright? Calm down, you're coming across as if I have upset you, and if I have I'm sorry.
6833754 Bad writing just makes me a little upset, sorry
Okay, a lot upset.
Ouch.
Bitches love my penis 'cause it's really big.