Luna just couldn't sleep and took a flight seeing a poor pony being attacked she save the pony only to learn something shocking and go on a quest to find King Sombra to get some answers. she is joined by Celestia, Twilight, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, PinkePie, Applejack, Rarity and a strange pony named Moonlight Eclipse!
The authors name is ThePonyEclipse while the OC is named Moonlight Eclipse. Just sayin' its kind of a red flag.
you got wrong is rainbow gender she is a she not a he and I think she never has said dude but good read
I liked it I haven't seen a fimfic like this in awhile,keep up the good work and don't let haters bring you down let it motivate you to do better. Ok
I can't wait to see what goes down with Luna and Celestia
One of the important parts of writing is finishing stories, you may not start out very good but finishing stories will help you realized how much you learned, and then if you want to, you can re-write your story.
Oh my this is Awsome!