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Trying to come back from the dead. Harder than I thought though...

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15 year old Nick Levitie, who people call Soar, has always wanted to fly, high in the air with the clouds. He always felt like there was a sense of adventure and freedom. After all, people tell him he has his head in the clouds.
15 year old Volanti Shadows has always wanted to be a Pegasus, but was born an Earth Pony. She's never really felt right with her life, and never been able to find her talent on the ground, always feeling she didn't belong, and never being able to get her cutie mark.
What happens when a headstrong human gets dropped into a world of magic, talking ponies, mythical creatures, and even humans.

(please leave some constructive criticism to help me improve my story writing)

Switches between first person of Volanti and Nick.

Edited by Blaze5565

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 4 )

looks amazing is this your first fic well good luck on making this story ^_^

6983119 no problem my friend :twilightsmile: (also i reply pretty fast)

Good story so far. Can't wait to see what happens

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