The 63 Files Extras

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A collection of substories based on the http://www.fimfiction.net/story/3746/The-63-files , exploring other pairings than the ones that http://www.fimfiction.net/user/punisher143 wrote.

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PinkieDash Part 1 · 13th Sep 2012 · 1,796 words
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PinkieDash Part 2 · 4th Oct 2012 · 1,166 words
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UnlocalEntity

UnlocalEntity #1 · Jun 8th, 2012 · · · PinkieDash Part 1 ·

>63 files
I should have FUCKING known... well played, anyhow.

punisher143

punisher143 #2 · Jun 8th, 2012 · · · PinkieDash Part 1 ·

Pretty good for a first time story and AGES better than my first time.
The only thing I managed to catch were some proper nouns not being capitalized and the way the story is formated at the moment makes it a little confusing to read. Both of those can be easily solved and I'd be more than happy to help in that regard.
Nice work.

glassguy

glassguy #3 · Oct 4th, 2012 · · · PinkieDash Part 2 ·

seems legit

Swagg

Swagg #4 · Oct 7th, 2012 · · · PinkieDash Part 2 ·

huh.....

Combinatory

Combinatory #5 · Oct 9th, 2012 · · · PinkieDash Part 2 ·

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You like?

Swagg

Swagg #6 · Oct 10th, 2012 · · · PinkieDash Part 2 ·

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Its an original idea. so i guess THAT alone makes it better than any other person's first time story. Personally, the story itself doesnt really fit into my own interests, so I doubt that I'll be sticking around to continue reading it...

but that being said, just ignore me and keep on writing. You've got a natrual talent for it! you've just gotta let your skills grow a bit. Maybe find an editor?