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I cn see thos getting good, favorited and thumbed:twilightsmile:

Pinkie is OOC, but it's good. I've read enough Crowley to know where this is going.

Purty good, Like and fave.

Normally I don't like flutterdash, but I can tolerate it for the sake of drama here. :pinkiesad2: Poor Pinkie.

I haz a sad nao....

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Pretty much.
Anyway, how is Pinkie OOC? Not trying to slander you or anything, I just wanna know where I went wrong so I can get better at writing her character.

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Hang in there my brony.

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She seems... a little serious. I mean, I've rarely ever seen Pinkie serious. But, that's just to me.

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Yeah, the only time we see Pinkie being serious is in the Party of One episode and that's after she's been broken. I see how I may have made her inner dialog too dark for the situation she was in. One one hand she's been waiting for Dash's answer for four months, but she still has hope. Hope which I left out of her personality.

At least that's my interpretation of what you mean.

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