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BadMothaCupcake
Listen kids. I write stories about ponies. And most times those stories contain clop. So skedaddle and let the adults read this jazz.
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Oh my god, this is brilliant. Faved, thumbed, and wanting more!
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Well, using "drug" in that type of context is incorrect, but that was the only mistake you made.
Next, how yearn was the character stuck in the POW camp? It sounded about five, years, so how can a pony beaten daily survive for such a ample amount of time?
Work on it, BUT!
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Very bewitching, keep it up!
The story looks to have potential. Have a moustache!
Eagerly awaiting what happens next
This is looking very interesting...
Have my fav!
And another moustache...
This shows promise.
I expect great things from you.
This has the potential to be epic!
tracked and watched, please don't disappoint
good show
now onto the next chapter.
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You're right, time to beat my pre reader. I'm looking at you, Roxy.
For your question, I'm assuming you mean "how long was she in the camp" or "how young was she when she was taken to the camp". As for that, it will be revealed later. The character herself doesn't know and since this is a first person fic, I can't reveal anything the character does not know or is told. It will be explained later though, promise.
To everypony else, thanks for reading!
582242 Indeed. Proofreaders should know more about grammar than you.
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:c
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Nah, he did catch a bunch of stuff and I can't expect anyone to catch absolutely everything.
Plus, we're rl bros and he'll be doing some artwork for me.
583083 Indeed. Good luck with future writing.
Must. Have. MOER!!!!
Seriously, I need it. Pleees?
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so wait, is this a twiluna? or luna x oc?
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No, no. It's a Rainbow Dash x Everypony.
Seriously though, you'll find out later. Although now that I think about it, Woona doesn't need to be tagged. In the first draft her part was a lot bigger, but now I'm realizing I don't need her as much. Celestia is best pony anyway.
This is beautifully sad. Insta-fav!
when dya think yall update?
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I'm about halfway through chapter 2 as of right now. To be honest, I really don't know. I wish I could give an exact date or at least an approximate date, but I can't. I write on completely on urges. I need to be in the mood to write. A lot or writers are good at sitting down and forcing themselves to write, but I tend to write complete and udder crap when I try to force myself to write. I would like to say by Friday or Saturday, but I can't make any promises.
727039 alright understandable just keep it up this story is too good to die like so many others.
This story is getting good. Can't wait for her to get her first surprise party from pinkie pie, though she probably wont take it well
dun dun dun
love the story keep it up!
Yes a new chapter...
*reads*
Oh no.. Pinkie will will be like
and throw a party
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Beware of Pinkie. Beware!
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Pinkie? Plus her? Party?
...
NightSoul´s right:
Dun dun duuuuuun!
Anyway:
I´m really curious for where this is going. Really a very good story.
And one of the very rare stories that made me start to tear up, thanks to the musical theme and the memories at chapter 1.
Wow...Very, very sad...I'm watching you. *clicks watch button*
Love the story. Have it in my favorites, liked it and tracking. Keep up the good work, and is this not featuring Shining Armor, because I see a love interest with Candence and the 1st person pony?
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Love interest between... a buh? No. No, no no. That was not the vibe I intended to give lol.
Luna was intended to be the Physical Therapist for the first person pony when I started the story, but after Candence was introduced to the show, I felt that she fit that role better than Luna did. From the age of nine to nineteen the first person pony was cut off from the world, so she didn't get anytime to progress mentally like regular foals do. So instead of having the mind of a late teenager, she is more of a child. Since Candence was Twilight's foal sitter, I thought it would be better to have her watch over Ms. First person pony. </rant>
P.S. Ratchet pony omgggg
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“The age I was taken,” I clarified. Candence embraced me in her hooves and pulled my body against hers. This time I didn’t push her away. It was a simple gesture, but it felt so warm and familiar. I then felt wetness on my shoulder and could faintly feel Candence’s body shaking.
That's what intentionally gave me the vibe.
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Hmm.. you do make a point. Maybe if I change it to something like: Candence wrapped me in a motherly embrace.
Interesting story.
I enjoy reading it but it's littered with LOTS of spelling errors...
And it's Cadence. Not Candence.
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Cadence...
I'll be damned. Thanks.
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No problem....
Quite a few people have mucked her name up so it's no biggie.
Fun facts about Mi Amore "Cadence" Cadenza's name.
Mi Amore literally translates to: My Love.
A Cadenza is a point in an orchestra musical piece where the orchestra stops playing so that a single artist (usually the player of a string instrument) can perform a solo piece.
Cadence is (in music) rythm, fall in pitch of voice, tonal inflection and the close of musical phrase.
Also Cadence was originally a unicorn when first concieved.
Then a pegasus.
Then an alicorn.
Cool huh?
This...
IS....
AWESOME!
And my anticipation for the continuation grows...........
This is good by the way, like really good. Like The Doctor versus the Dalek good.
i love this story. i cant wait to read more.
I'm still waiting on our favorite Pink pony to find the newcomer and throw a massive party
Attack dragon? More like fax machine
I felt uneasy. Is this what my live is going to become?
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Thanks.
Roxy... you got some 'splaining to do
Is this fic still going on?
I was really drawn in by the premise, and found the story itself quite interesting.
It would be a real shame if it was cancelled.
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My editor Roxy and I are busy with University crap and get easily distracted with dying in Dark Souls, but this will continue.
School is hard,
Take your time to do it right, but i can't wait for more!
Have a good day!
Hurry the fuck up, plz
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The fuck is not to be rushed. When one person makes love to another, time must be taken. You cannot just go in pumping away like a ragged animal and expect both parties to be satisfied. You've got to build up the fuck. You've got to respect the fuck. Only then will you walk away with a sense of true pleasure.
But seriously, I'm working on it.
1850543 "WTFIGO" random quote=watthefuckisgoingon
1850543 It may be the fact that it's 3AM but you just blew my mind all over the wall with a response about hurrying up, WHILE maintaining an impresive sexual innuendo!
Worth the favorite just for that.
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I'm happy to see someone gets it. That was my one stroke of genius for the year.
When is the next update?