Twilight Sparkle hosts a sleepover to reveal her secret feelings for a friend. Her plan is soon ruined when she can't seem to get her alone. When she finally finds an opportunity to get the filly that has caught her eye, she seizes it. When she finds that one of her close friends has already taken her longtime crush, she must try everything she can to get her to herself again.
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This is the first story I've ever written, please go easy on it.
Is good you may proceed to the next chapter
You did a good job on the story so far, if a bit short.
I like it.
Dash's statement "Dare! Duh! What did you think o was going to do?" has the letter "o" where I believe the letter "I" is supposed to be. Otherwise, the story is going good so far.
Thanks for catching my mistakes so I can go in and fix them!
No twilight! that plot never works! stay good twilight! stay good!
Foreshadowing.
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Aww, Fluttershy is my favourite. I don't want Twilight to hurt her feelings by making Applejack jealous!
...That seems rather silly.
One second Twilight is willing to bow out at the mere suspicion of Rarity having hots for Applejack, next she`s plotting to rip apart already existing relationship between Fluttershy and Applejack? Bipolar much?