Thunder has just been assigned to captain the newest ship, the Celestia. He is sent to quell a rebellion, an assignment that should be simple for his newest ship, but the mission is much more complicated than anypony could possibly have imagined...
Please criticize to your hearts content.
What is Thunder's last name?
Also, great story so far!
whats this a crossover of?
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What's Fluttershy's last name?
683698 Uhhh...Hippocrene? From "Into a new world."
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Oh my bad, I wasn't aware fan-fictions were canon.
Jokes aside, not bad on the fic, mate. Keep at it!
This sounds SO familiar I just can't place where I've heard this before
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Warhammer 40k, sort of.
Two updates within four hours, you should be proud my good man.
Hmm, let's see how the universe would be like if Celestia lost that card game.
Good fic - but sometimes a little bit silly ,,, Cupcakeguns? ... I know, you wanted to place some of the series content in our fic, but this sound silly to me
Railguns, Plasmaguns, Gausscanons, Laserguns ...
But the rest is pretty good
Lord inquisitor blue blood... prepare for your death.