Working for royalty is never easy, it becomes even harder when said royalty is trying to get me to marry their daughter who hates me for some reason. It becomes almost impossible when my neighbors want me for themselves. I hate this planet.
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I like it, but you need to use more commas.
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YOU DID IT!!!
I can't wait to read more of this.
Holy Sht, I checked if this story had updated as late as yesterday, and low and behold, the adventure continues (Can't wait for Ian to become King and meet Celestia)
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Agreed, there were some parts that ran on a bit due to a lack of punctuation. Still, I'm glad to see this continue.
Man I’m glad this story isn’t dead. Love the way you write.
I don’t mean to be ‘that guy’ but Gambeson would’ve been a better option for the goons to get, cheaper and better than leather.
8648889 Then as your first duty as my editor, find the places where I must plant down the comma shrubs! Post haste editor nun giving the middle finger to the screen!
Great chapter! Do I detect a bit of Brutal Legend References? Also the lamp is called a Sconce, not a scone.
More Please
Damn... I want to call out bullshit on how he survived all that but at the same time It's been a while since I just read a story of a badass human doing badass things. I don't like where this is going, I love it and I impatiently await the next chapter.
Cursed/Magic battle axe?
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Do you write this on Docs?
Yes your back I give it 10 of 1 butter fingers because I am random
8649237 I can easily transfer this to docs to make it easier for you to edit but when I write I use either this or when I know my mind isn't in the game, Grammarly.
Lol if you're looking for a job I can help you with that.
Naming the Axe, Bessy. Good ol' Bessy
From Awkward flow here and there, but otherwise good chapter.
I love this story you are amazing 10/10 and it's just the beginning that's the best part keep up the great work you got yourself a fan
The Griffins stood no chance in stopping his
Scrawny is fucking awesome
I just hope
This is a great chapter! Good work to the Author.
Im sorry to say that I completely forgot about this story, and I had to re read it from the beginning so I could remember what was happening. This really is a good story
Please continue.
The Monk
I am SO happy this is not dead. I loved this story way too much for it to end incomplete. Hope we can get some new chapters soon.
I believe in you, angry human in the world that features/may actually be Equestria! Kill 'em all!
Sigh.
A story I can truly enjoy and not point out to much I dislike. I'm serious! For whatever reason, your story here just clicks with me and I look forward to your future chapters. But do take your time! It's worth the wait.
Blood for the blood god!
What about the keys he took off the guy he murdered outside?
8664102 He finds out much later that they were the same key, all of them were the key to open the front door to the manor.
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Well, I guess that will be useful when he adds more beings to his party. He'll need to give them keys to access his house when he sends them off on assigned quests.
(Make sure the chance of success is never below 100%! They'll always find some way to die, otherwise...)
I just came back from a long break and i see this updated. :D
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Its sound like the axe is a curse weapon like Zoro's curse swords that kinda have a mind of it's own from One Piece:
Human ends up in an new place, something happens, and then kills? Same old, boring story.
I had hopes for this story, but it became the same old story, like so many others.
Welp, time to look for other stories.
So, the guys in the doors in the sides of the hallway… they do an ambush WITHOUT picking up their weapons first (and there are six of them and the rest don't bother him while he gouges one's eyes out - not a super fast process - giving him so much time he can kick the blinded one out the window).
I mean, this has been a bit absurd all along - that's just the kind of story it seems to be aiming to be - but that seems a bit much.
Fun fact: jeans are fairly blade resistant (won't protect you against getting stabbed but are almost slash proof)
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Good to know wait how slash proof are they?