Working for royalty is never easy, it becomes even harder when said royalty is trying to get me to marry their daughter who hates me for some reason. It becomes almost impossible when my neighbors want me for themselves. I hate this planet.
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Nice.
You might wanna run over the chapter again I saw a couple mistakes here and there
I'm glad that you treated the thief situation sensibly. I've seen a lot of stories where the protagonist forgives and pardons them instantly, then gives them food and invites them into their personal retinue. A crime is still a crime and needs to be punished. A year of hard labour seems harsh, but Diamond Dogs value strength and I suppose that he cannot be seen as weak or too merciful.
It’s always a good day when this story is updated. Also why do I feel like Gilda and Greta are going to give him the “You almost died!” conversation when he gets back lol.
It's always nice to see a favorite update.
Praise the Emperor for three is an update
Yesh! An update!
Nice chapter
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The punishment I originally had in mind was going to be a lighter sentence, then I remembered that they were stealing vital supplies, so it was then turned into a harsher sentence.
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Oh yeah that conversation is definitely coming up.
Ya new chapter
Could stage the rebuild of the cart tracks by clawing channels into the floor slabs first, that teh wheels run in, and then add square bar in the corner first to act as sunk rail, like in road metro tramlines? eventually fat L would be used for rim and flange operation with as flat a surface as possible?
Needs discovery of oils, fats, tars etc on bulk of metal rails coats them and stops rusting as much? Depending which is what in cost of aquiring, bronze, cast iron, crucible steel, although some deep research might get them luck with a flowing metal channel over a series of air geyzers for continous casting? then again, Im hoping the noise ends up with them having an associate of the waste disposal metal casting long lived style.
You've got a lot of run on sentences in this one.
Light editing aside solid chapter. Like where it’s going and it’s a nice in between between the earlier combat chapters and future city building ones.
When is he going to interact with Celestia?
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At the Gala, where all the chaos is going to happen.