Working for royalty is never easy, it becomes even harder when said royalty is trying to get me to marry their daughter who hates me for some reason. It becomes almost impossible when my neighbors want me for themselves. I hate this planet.
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More please
I love this chapter and I can't wait for more.
Remember, take the stealthy bastard route. Taunt them with the sight of their dead brethren. Gaslight them. Drive them to the depths of paranoid insanity and then go for the throat.
neat. in the words of Archer "RAMPAGE!"
Well that's both incredibly sad, yet badass.
Whooo! Kill them all Ian just like Anakin did to those younglings.
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You just don't steal another man's computer... He/She that does, deserves the wrath that has been set upon them.
May RNJesus have mercy on your Code...
stay low go fast
Go the rogue/ranger; that is the way humans were meant to solo, if they had to solo.
Murder! Blood! Gore!
Also, the Diamond Dog makes me think of Peanut from the Housepets! comics... Look it up.
*Sneak increased to 28*
Two more levels and you can get 6 times damage from one handed sneak attacks. Try to get yourself to level 40, so you can get past traps without triggering them. Just make sure Scrawny doesn't trigger them either..
8169000 This is why I always go solo when I'm not playing Berserker builds, and sometimes even then. Even the so called "sneaky" companions are all clumsy idiots who always trigger every trap and bum rush the enemy at the first sign of trouble.
8169208 8169000 OH what, you mean when you are crouching in the shadows with your dagger out, and right before you go for the stealth kill your companion decides to take the long way around and steps on a pressure plate and then a set of bone alarms and alerts every single enemy in the area to both your presence and get you killed because you were playing on Master difficulty? Oh sure that happens all the time.
And so it begins.
*<>* so ...is like ...the tutorial over now or ? . , ?
NOW YOUR A MAN. A MAN MAN MAN.
WOOP WOOP Someone call the Police- we got a bad-ass over here!
WOOP!!! badass alert, commence THE CARNAGE YAAAHOOO!!!!!!
Rush B!!
Most of your sentences are run-ons. Your characters have the attention span of an army of Shih Tzus on several tons of crack. MY KINGDOM! MY KINGDOM FOR A COMPLETED THOUGHT THAT ISN'T DISCARDED THEN PICKED UP AGAIN A FEW PARAGRAPHS LATER.
You, my good sir and/or madam, really, really need an editor.
Always a pleasure to see someone who isn't a moral relativist and able to tell the difference between killing and murder.
YES LET IT BEGIN, LET IT BEGIN BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD, SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE. MAIM KILL BURN, MAIM KILL BURN, MAIM KILL BURN
I really like your story, hope it keeps the ball rolling and on a side not in the last chapter when the king read the note and the main character was marching off, i thought of in asura's wrath when he went berserk you got an achievement called "HEADS WILL ROLL" and in my mind when he was marching of that achievement popped up in the corner of the screen. Anyway hope to see this continue i'm hyped
I am Thou, Thou at I
You have increased the bond between you and Scrawny.
He will now DIE FOR YOU
8172415 Well unless one magically falls into my lap then at the current moment I am shit out of luck.
You know I'm surprised that the King didn't send a fucking army to recover his daughter, or at least a team of highly experienced guards to help our main protagonist. Send in them Griffon Commandos you daft cunt of a leader!
Then again will it be one of those moments where the King does bring his army, but by the time they arrive all the bandits will be dead and the objective complete? Or will our King come in just in the nick of time to save the protagonist?
Either way, he must be stupid or has some form of trust in Ian to get back his daughter.
Moar!!!!!!!!! i wahahant-want- more.....please
This needs an update. ASAP.
Fight scenes pending
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I can already see him going on a rampage that looks similar to this:
Or this:
Then the Griffon King and his men would show up afterward like the army at the end of the Monster Squad movie but to find a bunch of dead griffons:
I bet that the next chapter will be titled: Crush, Kill, Destroy, SWAG
Anyway ... decent story that reads itself. Please do not tarry with the next chapter too much
I need more Dammit! MOAR!
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PLEASE!, PLEAAAASSSEEE author. Make the next chapter's title this, it's too good to pass up
*subconsciously nudges around a pile for fries*
*Looks down*
'Wait 4 Update'
*Eats Fries*
I really hope this updates soon. Found this story and it’s really good so far, but the hiatus is worrisome. Hope you continue this really anxious to see what happens next
I hate to be "that guy" but since he has a diamond dog with him, he could have just tunneled into the place.
I would very much like more content to consume, but I can wait patiently.
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Agreed, this story catches attention and definitely deserves to be finished
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Yeah but that would be the boring way. Horse world is following action movie rules and physics.
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I have heard the call and came!
Maybe, where am I?
8576989 Is it happening? Did an editor fall from the sky? Also nice profile pic.
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Perhaps, where am I, and who requires an editor!
8591103 ME! I did cause apparently I leave errors even though I use an error check app to fix it for me
8591181I mean, when I read through, I didn't find any noticeable errors. But I'm willing to take a look.
*Joins the others waiting*
"Don't mind me just waiting for the slaughter."
Moar please?
SOOOO, YA GOIN' TA UPDATE ANY TIME SOON?
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Also, do you wish an editor? I may or may not be asking REALLY late.
Holy shit is it dead? NO I REFUSE *proceeds to beat the
shitlife back into it*Ians theme for the start of this chapter
Wait I just remembered, didn't Ian check the bag when he got it back, how the heck did he get tricked into thinking some rocks and a fake laptop were the real deal? Did he not look in further or at least touch some of the stuff?
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probably enchanted to look like gold may also turn like gold coins, the author doesn't have to explain everything.
Queue the badass music.