Hi, I'm SunSplash! I love my little pony and reading (if it's the right book).
Trixie decides that she's going to attack ponyville again. mean wile star mist desperately tries to make friends but no pony want's to be Friends with an almost full grow pony who still doesn't have her cutie mark do they? when Trixie attacks ponyville star mist is like a chance for a friend or enemy?????
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Pretty good, It just needs to be edited. BTW meanwhile and anything are both one word not two.
Okay, I'll give this a like because it seems promising, but I won't follow it just yet. For my advice, be wary as you might face a lot of hate do to your grammar and spelling.
Hmm, your grammar doesn't seem completely horrid, just a bit of going over and it can be better. If you like, I don't mind helping with that.
i like it
keep it up, i think that rarity will eventually find out, but i'm not sure 
trixie!
or maybe twilight!
oh! i know! discord!
no, not him, how about king sombra!
or maybe it's a new pony.....
mean wile
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what???
awesome so far, i think that star will go along with the plan for a while, but then she gets turned over to the good side and work against trixie. im not sure tho. and as a wise old pony told me, dont listen to the haters, they are only jealous
OMG Best story Iv'e ever read!:
keep up the good work.