• Published 11th Oct 2015
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Apples at Sunset - Wolfton

Being cast in a world of sentient ponies is one thing, but when you fall in love with one it makes for an interesting stay.

Comments ( 5 )
Comment posted by Steel Quill deleted May 28th, 2023

A great story, but ended a little abruptly, I wish there was a sequel

So..m good story and all, but I'm confused a bit. Who was the stallion? Is he supposed to be Death? I Kinna get the Death vibe from him, especially how he says we won't see each other for a long time.

I'll be honest, I'm not a fan of the story style wherein you have something with a great flow and all of a sudden just murder that flow by having a flashback to a previous experience.

However I did like the "bad" ending as a change of pace.

Wow. Absolutely brilliant, what a rollercoaster of emotions.

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