Pinkie attempts to set things right in a devastated world, but time refuses to be changed easily. Now at the start of the cycle, Pinkie sees the apocalypse from a front seat. How will she get home, and will she help Earth while she's there?
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I'd saaay... 5.
a good chapter as to voting I have to vote 3
Harts Fire
Mostly One, and a bit of Five.
Gonna have to go both 1 and 5 for this one. As much fun as the story time could be, it would also be an amusing noodle incident as we see how the city is doing.
One and Five does indeed sound like it would be a nutty mix, so I'm jumping on the bandwagon.
Surprise me.
Typo time!
missing word.
Hmm, let's see for the votes...
1)
I'm really curious about how things went in detail with the giant pony, and I'm very tempted to vote this one, but at the same time, I also want to vote other things, and the chapter would be too short if it was just about that, so no.
2)
I just can't see how that would work, so that will definitely not get my vote. I mean, from what times Equestria would call? One year before all started? If Pinkie stayed a few days, she would have a call from Equestria a few days after she left?
Well, I CAN see a "coherent" way. Will see she's not here when they come back, then go back to Equestria, say what happened to the ponies here, after a lot of (calcul of what would happen if you left in space travel)/magic, they discover she went a year back, then Twilight use her spell to travel back in time (I'm thinking of Twilight because she simply is the best at magic[and you need that with spells of that caliber), and already used the spell of time travel so she knows how it works and have a little practice with it.)
But I actually don't know how they could know she was a year back, when she could just have been lost in space (except that it's Pinkie and she seemed to know what she was doing) and I don't know how Twilight would get to her. The easiest way would be to talk about it to the Luna from a year back so she can look for Pinkie's dream , but then, she would know about everything, so maximum risk of paradox. Telepathy is something I don't think Twilight can do, let alone to someone she don't even know where she is on the planet.
Another far-fetched way would be if Twilight found a way to somehow "trace" Pinkie, but how? With the gift?
So yeah, a bunch of problem with that.
3)
Ok, this one is kind of possible, but I can hardly see her "radiant" and ready to lead ponies THAT fast after becoming a princess. The mission would let her a bit more time to adapt. Mission that would get done either way, even if this was the dominating choice.
(That said, maybe pricesshood comes with a fast accommodation with your new duty, so everything is possible.)
4) and 5)
The officer was right, the ponies don't have a lot to fear from the others. A scouting mission seems pretty useless to me. Furthermore, controlling the giant pony might be difficult if there isn't any royalty around to keep her calm and nice. After all, she has the same urge to infect humans, after all, and the power of an order given by a leaving royalty might fade with time.
So yeah, unless there was another royalty among the other ponies, if we're going with a scouting mission, Aiko (and thus, Kuri,) will have to stay back there.
tl;dr
I vote 4.
6584003 Typo fixed. More than one word was missing.
i don't think 2 should happen until ~ the same time that the first group got to Equestria... i mean time frame wise no one had contact with the asians until near the end if i remember right...
6584012 You said what you don't want, but you didn't vote.
6584062 because other than 2 i wouldn't mind any of them... i guess i'll use my vote as -1 point for 2
One and five
6584091 Select, darn you!
1 is probably pov switch and i typically dont like those unless a overall topic has been closed. todays topic seems to be aiko is now a princess.
2 i've already mentioned.
3 Seems a bit too soon but you could still mess around with it and make it work...
4 agian it seems a bit to soon. we haven't even told giant pony the plan.
5 makes the most sense but again its leaving the topic...
why not mix 1, 3, 4, and 5. get a summery of what happened rather than full blow by blow of 1. (its just clop isn't it...) explain the plan to giant pony and let aiko rest while going on an excursion (5 being the main focus of the chapter...) that way the topic isn't abandoned till later (shes resting), the new friend isn't being a bump on a log (is having stuff explained, even if its written off as "the so and so is explaining things to her") and there's meat to the chapter in exploring the city.
2: Contact with Equestria happens out of nowhere! How'd that happen?
Got to see where they are in the timeline, and get some answers on if this is the same world.
number 1 for shits and giggles, but I tilt mainly towards number 4 or 2
Everything but 4 sounds pretty fantastic. Although I am quite curious about #1
6585047 What's your vote? :D
One because I'm pretty interested in how a Kirin got friendly with a friggin giant.
And five because it seems the most logical.
One will have to happen first then number five.
Well, the first one should be interesting, but certainly not entire-chapter-worthy.
So let it be 1 and 5. Military would like some recon, I recon.
6585069 lets go with half #1 and half #5
I wood like to see half #1 and half #5 in the next chapter.
Dragonfox
I'd say something between 3 and 4. They march out, but the princess wants to go along and try to help.
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Remember this song...
I think Hiro 'Walked like an Erection?'