Neat!

Gotta admit, while I agree it's not the same story anymore, I don't like the split. The original story doesn't have a proper ending and this 'Pinkie continuation' isn't a sequel.

man when I saw the word complete on One Step, Two Step, Three Hoof, Four Dead I was like 0_0 waa...what just happen then I want 2 your story page and found this I'm like ookk confusion gone

I feel it would be a good idea to add a "sequel" chapter to OSTSTHFD because if I hadn't been browsing I would have never found out you had decided to split the story... I can only imagine how many readers you just lost if you don't.

3, 4 and 5 make no sense, while 1 is just outright dangerous. 2 seems the best option, though they should stick close together, keep their orifaces closed and their bodily fluids inside them, avoid confrontation and above all, be wary.

"Expect the unexpected"

6507739 I don't even have the strength to argue it anymore. It is literally the events that follow the first one. It is the very definition of a sequel. There wasn't even a pause. They even share a chapter. It's as much of a sequel as any two stories can be.

Holy crap, where did that came from? Reading time!.

She went blank, and it didn't come for a few long seconds██before a little picture appeared, claiming technical difficulties.

double space (ya gotta itchy space bar hoof der pardner!)
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6507739 The prequel may seem to not have ended but I took it as resolved as far as it could go in a short time frame and it segued over to this story just fine. Gotta realise this is a parallel story to William's and gives a view into not just causes but relates the Asian side to us as well. What we missed out on with previous story. What a mess this will make of China when it hits mainland if not already.

I hope Aiko suddenly works out how to make a shield, I think are going to need it.