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So, how many bits are Twilight's "friends" gonna put in the betting bag in their matchmaking attempts?
And how badly will Twilight's emotional stability be screwed when the plans clash and they come tumbling down?
Twilight, the clueless harem owner. I loves it so much. I hope to see that more often as time goes on also you keep being awesome Lyra.
and the story thickens
still rooting for spitfire and trixie
cheerile= meh
760055 I gotta agree. It seems that Rarity is conspiring with Trixie, Applejack is pulling for Cheerilee, Fluttershy for Spitfire... and who knows what Pinkie and Dash are thinking, other than Dash wanting Trixie to not win.
Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter! This one wasn't as Trixie-focused as I thought it'd be, so good on you for that!
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Iiii see a pattern, do yoooouuuu?
I still don't know who I want to win!
Hehehe I like the proxy war brewing between Rarity, Aj, and Fluttershy.
Some of the scene transitions seem really sudden, I understand whats going on but its just not smooth. For example, after the party, before they prepare for bed the other characters seems to just vanish and its like Twilight's talking twith AJ and then BAM time for bed, just the four and Spike left. Maybe just a line or two about getting everyone out the door or waving goodbye or something just so I'm being shown what happened to everyone who was in the scene eaalier.
Today i had a crappy day so i logged on here to put me in a good mood and when i saw you updated this i almost did a cartwheel
What are Pinkie and Rainbow thinking?
I'm waiting for the wreck to develop, myself. And at what point will Luna sneak a copy of Tenchi Muyo into Twilight's bags?
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Thanks for the Tenchi comment, 'cause now I don't hafta. The Tenchi Solution looms at the horizon?
Yeah, this has very much the dynamics of a harem comedy. Since those are a guilty pleasure of mine, I don't mind.
The real question is, How blatant will this contest get before Twilight finally notices?
I certainly hope that Spitfire remembers to bring a gift back from Cloudsdale for Twilight. She might otherwise fall behind with a whole day where she can't bicker and jab at Trixie Also, way to go Spitfire if life gives you a Twilight, turn her into your pillow!
Another great addition to the story Wrabbit. This is my favorite ongoing story right now and I just love seeing it pop up in my favorites with an update.
Truth to be told, from what i saw so far i would like it if Trixie and Spitfire end up together
Damn it! I STILL can't choose between them!!!
And now you've made Trixie more approachable too.... Curse you, fate!
On a serious note though, great work, Wrabbit.
I swear I actually heard a "wrong answer" buzz in my head at the exchange between Applejack and Rarity.
I'm sorry, this is something that really kind of bugs me - not only must all six of the Elements be lesbians, not only must as many of them as possible hook up with one another, but then that must be hastily exposited in a scene that manages to make what's already a huge coincidence feel like something absolutely contrived just to quickly put on a parade of all the author's ships. It happens so often, and it kind of takes away from and cheapens the part of the story we're supposed to be focusing on.
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Yeah, just had to say that. The rest of the chapter is good, it's funny, it's just... that scene, ow my head.
Go TwiFire come on Spitfire win this!!
Also really awesome chapter and emotional ending i love it
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Lunar Justice
Come on Spitfire ! You gotta pull it together and win that Lavender mare !
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Money may not change hooves, but something else may.
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Is that a new subgenre? I rather like it.
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Thank you. Sometimes it just sort of works out that way. Though I have to point out that the kiss Trixie gave her was Twilight's first intentional kiss, chaste or not.
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Yeah, I'm gonna have to come back and do something about the end of party transition. It sorta slipped past my final read-through.
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That makes me so happy, you just don't know. And now I want a Twilight for a pillow...
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Oh, you mean Luna the original prankster?
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The problem with those is that they often end in a manner less than satisfactory to the audience. I hope this won't be like that.
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A new option has appeared!
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Thank you kindly.
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I was afraid it would come off like that. The real focus of those scenes was not to introduce the rest of my headcanon, but to show the rest of the Elements' reaction to Twilight's sudden love life. Those two ships are the most natural progressions to me. Dash and Pinkie are partiers, and AJ and Rarity have that "Odd Couple" vibe going. And does it really come off as that contrived? Don't you have to be friends before you become lovers to forge a truly strong relationship? Also, you gotta think that there's not too many stallions in the show, so something like this is if not commonplace, then at least accepted by society at large.
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She's aware of the stakes.
726804 how bout this, Clop SpitLight doesnt happen often enough all CheeriLight are clop or borderline clop
I don't know of a clop SpitLight Same with a non-clop CheeriLight
I am hoping Spitfire wins just because I like the pairing
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Again, it's probably more the presentation that makes me say it feels contrived and cheap than the scenario itself, unlikely though it seems. Having characters exposit about things, especially romance, does that even when there are no particularly notable coincidences involved. It's part of "show, don't tell". If Rarity and Applejack were to, say, join the conversation and sort of just be affectionate, rather than start openly talking about their own relationship for the first time in the story right after Pinkie and Dash hook up, it would feel a lot more natural...
And the problem with your logic there is that
obviously Ponyville is Big Mac's haremthat implies they have no other friends or possible romantic interests. Not saying I want to see, say, Rainbow Dash paired up with one of the other weather ponies we never even see, but when you're pairing them all off the question of "why not" comes up - why wouldn't any of them go for someone outside that single social circle?763201
It's not so much a matter of "why not", as it is a somewhat natural progression of their feelings. AJ and Rarity I see as the most natural. How many times have we seen two people who are complete opposites in many ways, ways that are fundamentally important to them, finally get into a situation where the dam just breaks, and their feelings overflow, carrying them along for the ride? I could see that happening to these two.
For Dash and Pinkie, it's the opposite. Two ponies who seem to fit hand in glove (so to speak). Their personalities compliment each other very well, and they share some interests that are vital to them. That's not to say that they can't find love outside of their immediate circle of friends. Twilight doing that is the whole focus of this story, and I plan on hooking up Fluttershy as part of a subplot that has yet to be introduced, just not anytime soon.
Perhaps if I were to tell their stories later on as a sort of prequel, it would all become clear?
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you want options? i can give more dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
How about after many shanagians Fluttershy ends up with Spitfire, Trixie becomes the third mare Pinkie wanted and Cheerilee becomes romantical involved with Princess Celestia. Twilight still completely oblivious meets Bareburn who finally tells her straight out that he likes to date her and she accepts with the final words "I wonder how many other chances of romance i missed."
766108 this needs to be an alternate ending
Spitfire is the obvious choice as it is the rarest shipping!!!
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I'm on Applejack's team- CHEERILEE ALL THE WAY!
Loving loving loving this story to death, its a great rad and really well written .
Its really funny and oh so very cleaver to boot.
Scor card.
Spitfire. 2
Cheerilee 1
Trixie 2
I love how all her friends are taking sides.
“So, how have you been since we lat met,
Fluttershy?” Spitfire asked the mare.
Lat should be last.
And then the dear author takes the 'shipping' dial and cranks it alll the way up to DANGEROUSLY SHIPPY. I mean holy hell, PieDash and Rarijack as well?? THE SHIPS!! THEY NEVER STOP!! I also love how Twilight's friends are starting to take sides. This is going to end one of two ways: with a LOT of heartbreak or a huge orgy (come ooon orgy).
Lyra you peeper.
2221965 fuck I owe you bits. I did NOT see those ships coming, I mean I know they exist but there a bit of a rarity to me. Its a nice change thou.
Oh god damnit. I was looking forward to this, and now both Rarijack *and* Pinkiedash in here? My most hated ships?
Not sure if I want to continue reading this now... dangit D:
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I just knew that Dash was talking about Pinkie when she was saying her marefriend was REALLY kinky. I am also hoping for a massive orgy to take place.
Ship ALL the ponies! Thank you for putting Dash with Pinkie and not another pony who shall go unnamed...And I'm a HUGE Rarijack fan so <glmops>. You have exaggerated both couples affections but it's for comedic purposes and it kinda works.
When Trixie mentioned Cheerilee "dry humping" Twilight, there wasn't too much "dry" about it.
I know what it's like to be teased for your voice so thank you for apologizing for that. <hug>.
Cool story bro. Please carry on. Should I go to bed Applebloom? But I should-
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Eeyup. With you 100% there.
oh my god, all the shipping!
Awesome story!!! I can see why the up votes are Over One Thousand!!
If twi still doesn't know that three mares love her, she really is oblivious
If words existed to describe my feelings about this story, I would post those. However, such words are nonexistent...unfortunately.
I can imagine a lesbian orgy happening later in the story. Just sayin'.
Twilight's friends are all filthy shippers. I like it.
So many ships so little time...
lucky we have quite the selection to choose from. and all the suggestive/ embracing situations that are soon to arise.
so Applejack ships Twilight and Cheerilee,
Rainbow Dash and Flutershy ships Twilight and Spitfire,
Rarity ships Twilight with Trixie,
And Pinkie just ships them all.
I'm willing to bet Pinkie is right just because its Pinkie and she knows these thing but i would ship them, in order
1) Twi-Fire
2) Twi-Lee
3) Twi-Xie
But all together just seems like it would be more fun
It seems the citizens of Ponyvile have found a new spectator sport.
And it seems to be a popular one!
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EEYUP
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Twilight has officially become a harem anime protagonist; Ichika would be proud
that only works with old skeleton key type keyholes where the hole goes through the door
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Eeyup.
very nice, just weird that Twilight can dance dirty. She can't dance at all lol. could have been funny if she accidentally tripped and fell into an awkward pose.
The ending of this chapter was perfect.
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Well, like the song says,
Don't you worry if you can't dance
Let the music move your feet
Love how everyone is rooting for their preferred choice like it's a fucking sports team.