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Good to know if I ever meet them.
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Thank you! Trixie really is a bit of a balancing act.
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Well, that certainly is an option.
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A lot of people seem to settle for the harem so they don't have to choose. And so long as everyone involved is okay with that, bully for them!
Did Spitfire just lose the race, dood? Or did she just drop rather low in the ratings, dood? Trixie and Celestia bonding, dood?
Schemes are afoot, dood.
If my hunch is correct, this is going to turn into a Twixie.
I'm amazed at just how much interference she has in her life and she's not even one little bit aware of it. That's probably what makes this so hilarious.
NOOOOO!
You can't end like that! I need to read about Trixie and Celestia's conversation!
Trixie? And Celestia? BONDING?!
Oh, the horror.
I mean, I like Twixi-- NO! Cheerilight. I'm still rooting for Cheerilight.
Nooooo, no friend-zoning Spitfire! Best pair must win!
I'm not to sure if I want to just go with the harem. It does seems easier than choosing which of the three pretty fillies bet's to be with the adorable and gorgeous Twilight.
I guess I was rooting for Twifire the whole time.
Can't wait until the next update. You are so good at keeping me heavily into this!!!
Yes! Trixie once again is back in the lead! Away with you, Wonderbolt, onward to the Sorceress' victory!
Cmon spitfire! You know she still wants you! Go for it!
I'm glad you updated this before I left. Thank you.
And wow, what a devious double play by Luna, Fluttershy and Nyx. That was really cool and, as a bonus, I totally did not see that coming. You rock.
Also, I noticed two things;
>As thanks for your selfless devotion to her safety and well-being, I shall grant you three access to my library whenever you wish. You need only knock on the door to gain access.”
There wasn't a " at the beginning of that dialogue which was kinda confusing, and
>“Twilight! You've got to so something! They're... they're...”
I think that 'so' is supposed to be a 'do'. D and S are right next to each other though, so I can see why it happened(if it happened unintentionally, I try not to assume).
Thank you for being awesome.
Awww, I was so hoping that at some point in that Spitfire would whisper that Twilight always had a shot even if she didn't realize it.
Those two have held mutual torches for each other for a large portion of their lives, and that really keeps me rooting for TwiFire in this although Spitfire seems to have sunk rather far back in the race after this.
You bastard. Friendzoning Spitfire.
See!? Even Fluttershy agrees!
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Not so fast, dood. A simple drop in Twilight's estimation does not a loss make.
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That's what comes of being so naive, and unworldly.
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Mwahahahahaha!
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Break out the shotgun, because the zombie apocalypse is upon us. They're BONDING!
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Believe me, the best pair WILL win. You just have to wait and see which is best.
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And here I was, worried I got too heavy-handed with this one.
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I think you've forgotten somepony.
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Don't count her out yet.
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I did it! A twist no one saw coming! And thank you for spotting that. Those responsible for the credits have been sacked. Err, I mean... Look! A huge orgy involving all the characters!
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Well, if a certain sphinx and a certain shy pegasus hadn't come in at that time, who knows what would have been said and/or done?
maaan you're making me do mental back bends. it's so hard to keep hope up for twifire when stuff like this keeps happening. then you make it seem like that is the inevitable path. then you make it seem hopeless again. my brain hurts and you're enjoying it, i know you are.
Hmm... Cheerilee is, as I commented a chapter or so back, the seemingly best natural choice.... NO! I will not falter! Trixie ftw!
Owlbear? Wut?
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Why, whatever gave you that nutty notion?
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Try here.
766108 Dear sweet Luna this! I agree this must be an altmative ending.
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Believe me, the best pair WILL win. You just have to wait and see which is best.
Buddy if you phrase it like that, it makes me think that none of the three will win Twilights heart.
You know that my recommendation(766108) was meant as a joke, i still want that one of the three (most preferably dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cheerilee.png ) to win.
943954 Ditto, though this chapter's taken me a bit by surprise. No Cheerilee at all!
Oh well, onto the next!
And Spitfire lost several points. Trixie gained some. Oh boy, didn´t expected that. This can only end one way now: Harem! Or Twifire. ^^
NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO.
NO.
Cheerilee is going to win author, SHE WILL! YOU HEAR ME! SHE WILL- OR THERE WILL BE HELL TO PAY! HELL TO PAY, AUTHOR, HELL TO PAY!
Their bonding oh god the horror of bonding but still a fabulous chapter
spitfire must win!!!!
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It might happen. Depends on if the endings I have planned aren't enough.
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Now, would I do a thing like that? Who would be so cruel as to string along their readers, only to have the official ending go like that?
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Don't worry. There'll be plenty of Cheerilee next chapter.
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You're really pulling for that harem, aren't you?
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MA'AM, YES MA'AM! I mean... maybe.
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Glad you liked it so far. Stick with me kid, we're going places.
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I'll put it this way: she still has a chance.
Dammit, I really wanted to see more conversation between Magic and Riddles...
947056 Thanks Wrabbit, you always deliver for your faithful readers.
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Twi and Dashie are the only ponies who i believe are capable to get and hold a harem.
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okay even though this is the first fic i read from you, i say yes i think that you would do something like that.
The reason for that is simple: the way you designed your answer shows that you like to mess with people.
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I might have to put some more in later on then. Providing I can work a scene in there like that. Maybe during Twilight's dream? Hmmm...
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I try my best.
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Twilight I could see holding on to a harem. She has the right blend of self-deprecating to reel them in, and bossy to keep them. Dash, I'm not so sure. Oh sure, she could pull in the mares, but keep them? I dunno. Maybe keep one and just have a "stable" of marefriends on the side to share.
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Then have I got a surprise for you! I like happy endings as much as the next author. And while I may use twists and turns to keep it obscured, rest assured that by the end of this, All parties in the story will be happy. Messing with the readers' heads is just a hobby. Try not to take it to heart. Seriously, the "nopony gets Twilight" ending just is not going to happen; so please, calm down, take a deep breath, and enjoy the ride. Though you may want to buckle up, because it's going to be a bumpy one.
Noo my hope of spiltlight are ruined
Beside that another great chapter wrabbit
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i never said that nobody get Twilight, or that you won't give a happy Ending.
I said that I'm afraid that you will give the twist that someone else, and not the three competitors, get Twilight.
"Something about crops, I think."
Urgh. Okay, I'm just going to go ahead and say...
I really don't want to see any of them lose.
Trixie, as I've said repeatedly, is my personal favorite, Spitfire has, to me, really shown the most genuinely empathy-inspiring emotion in this story, and there's something about Cheerilee that I just cannot enjoy seeing beaten. I feel now that I won't be able to enjoy an ending where two of them get rejected, though I'll probably end up being surprised in the end.
...
Suddenly I can't help but imagine it ending with Trixie/Celestia and Spitfire/Luna.
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I hope you continue to enjoy it.
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Ah, I see now. I will tell you now, with no equivocation, that your fears are unfounded. Will I tease and play on those fears in my comments? Yes. Will the story end as you fear? No.
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Why so quick to assume that it was Rarity bringing out the crops?
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I just hope that I don't disappoint you all. Hmmm... Trilestia and Lunafire you say... Nah. Maybe for another story.
Oh I will I was just pulling toward spitlight there I guess I'll settle for cheerlight instead.
I just can NOT go for trixie EVER
no! Dont friend zone Spitfire!! please no!!!! she waited for so long!
Score Card
Spitfire. 5
Trixie. 3
Cheerilee. 1
Feels good to solve that riddle without looking ahead!
Owlbear, huh. D&D reference ftw!
Oh man Spitfire. You had such a perfect chance. SUCH A PERFECT CHANCE. Totally blown. And now she's quite upset with you.
...Now what? Also lol at the whole "Nyx" thing. How...coincidental.
You're all wrong, it should be Luna. Luna is best pony
That was a pretty cool chapter. I am intrigued about what Nyx and Luna were talking about after they teleported the others away though. Keep up the great writing!
I wanna know more about Nyx. and bonding? Will they be close enough to make bed springs creak?
This is getting better all the time.
OH DEAR GOD NO25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m5vibsPejW1rurwhto2_500.jpg THEY'RE BONDING!
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THE HORROR!
Both Spitfire and have pulled ahead! Though it is undecided whom has the bigger lead .
I mean on one hoof you have "Oh i had/may still have a crush on you~"
On the other you have "I am bonding with your mother figure and mentor "
Who can win this?
Interesting chapter
I'm curious as to what happend between Nyx and luna in the past, but that's probably another story
Oh my God, they're bonding!!!! bluebus.s3.amazonaws.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/sarcasm-big-bang-theory.jpg
4323826 um nyx nightmare moon