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Well if the chapter name is referencing what I think it's referencing, we're fast approaching the point of no return. I can't wait.
Oh, those riddles. How I love them and hate them at the same time.
I'm still wondering if you've already decided on the victor (victors?), or how will you reach that... But regardless, I still have my hopes placed all into Cheerilee. =3
I absolutely adore the way you write Luna's speech. Do you scour dictionaries? Wonderful words and patterns-
Good job as always!
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Gotta love that determination if nothing else.
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No problemo. While I can't blame you, I can grin at the attempt.
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Spitfire appreciates the support.
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Any clues as to whom it is?
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Correct. A turning point has been reached for the suitors.
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Cheerilee thanks you for your support.
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Actually, there's this nifty little site I use to get archaic words over here. As for Thees, thous, and thines, I use whatever sounds about right.
I know to what the title refers, but remain uncertain to which character and moment it applies metaphorically...afraid I'll have to wait for hindsight to make it clear. You've done a bang-up job of creating a fun and playful but genuine suspense; I still don't know who to root for! [- hmph!]
The answer to your riddle is,
I stride behind you at morning,
I rise to meet you at night,
I follow you faithfully all through the day,
But I'm gone when you turn out the light.
Ahh, things are starting to more forward. Come on one of you.
A single direct move will win you your dream mare.
All three stand at the banks of the river, but which one will commit to crossing first?
As for the riddle: I think the answer is your shadow.
this was a fabulous chapter i can't wait for the next installment to be posted
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Thank you. Hindsight is always 20/20. For the riddle, you know of what I speak.
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You win an internet cookie. Heck, take the whole bag. Just don't eat too many. They may be a little... stale.
HOLY CRAP, I'VE BEEN FEATURED!
Throws confetti in the air::
I read the first few paragraph it made my day. Then I read the rest and I think twi is starting to catch on. Last I read to end and I have one question does twi know everything now
Yay, Cookies.
this calls for a celebration. Cookies for everyone,
No wait, cookies for no-one. that can be just as much of a celebration, if you don't like cookies.
+1 Internets for being featured though.
1031737 Congratulation on your feature!
And thank you for the link! I just love words like that, and archaic stuff. Fun to read! Maybe I can learn how to write Luna now.
1031998 1031921 good job in getting featured
hmmm, it seems like every story I follow like a uninhibited stalker seems to get featured eventually... That must mean I have awesome taste for awesome authors! Me think things just got 20% more awesome
The answer was all too obvious: a shadow.
I am beginning to suspect this is going to end in a four-way relationship.
aw lawdy! Spitfire, pull out your sexy shoes! now's the time you gotta shine!
Yes, go Cheerilee! Everyone's got their game-face on now, it's gonna go right down to the wire!
Who will win? Who shall fall? And why the hell am I talking like the narrator?!?
Easily one of your best, Wrabbit. Particularly the extraordinarily cute scene in the kitchen between Twilight and Cheerilee.
Rooting for Cheerilee.
But I have no answer yet for your riddle.
This was a great read, faved, tracked, watched, all that stuff.
Rooting for Spitfire!
and the answer is a shadow. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
Awesome story. I read it all today. Needless to say. i need to get outta me damn chair.
Yay new chapter! Go spitfire! wooo! Excellent chapter you delightfully, devious, designer of words.
I'm thinking that the answer is...a shadow.
Once you "Cross the Rubicon" you are fully committed to an action. Banks of the Rubicon is referencing when Julius Caesar was crossing the Rubicon river into Gaul. When he did so it made the civil war a certainty. No Roman general was allowed to cross that stream with a standing army. To do so was treason. So obviously the significance of this to the chapter is that Spitfire, Trixie, and Cheerilie will be committing treason in order to pursue Twilight and shall be banished to the moon by the Solar Sisters so that they (the sisters) can keep Twilight for themselves.
One small typo:
her spine. I lover (love) her.
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Thank you. I hope you continue to enjoy it.
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Well, she can't remain oblivious forever. Eventually, a brick is going to bean her, and she'll see what's happening around her. And yes, she is beginning to suspect something. At least with Cheerilee.
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Thank you. I hope it keeps happening, but I'm happy just being featured once. All I wanted was for people to realize my story was there and give it a try. But I got over 70 new faves since I updated, 35 of those on the first night alone. Needless to say, I was pleasantly surprised.
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Thank you, and you're welcome. It has made writing Luna interesting.
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In that case, there's a few stories I know of you might want to follow so they can get some lovin' too.
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Your correctitude will be confirmed or denied in the next chapter.
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Always a possibility.
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We can put on a show! My uncle has barn we can use, and my cousin can sew the costumes!
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Stalker? Why, I have no idea of what you speak, good sir! I agree, making Trixie antagonistic all the time, just lessens her as a character. She can be so much more than that. As for the paragraphs... well, I tend to make them a tad bit on the long side when there's not a lot of interactive dialogue going on. Sorry, it's just kinda the way I do things. I guess you could say I draw some influence from David Weber.
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Thank you. I figured that the kitchen was a good place to have things start to heat up. i38.photobucket.com/albums/e132/whiterabbit75/mlfw2223-ba_dum_tis.gif
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Don't worry. I'm sure the answer is right on your heels.
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Thank you for your support. And yes, by all mean, get up and stretch those legs!
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I have to say, that this is a well-read group. Several have correctly determined the meaning behind the chapter title. However, none have claimed treasonous intentions! Let's hope they don't mind sharing Twilight... at least sometimes... And thanks for the catch, I'll track that one down and fix it. Then sack those responsible for it.
Heheh, I seriously love this story. I'm alittle sad that it's (probably) going to end soon. But i'm sure the ending will be worth it! Keep up the great work!
ok ,we have a problem here. I dint see a chapter 14? is it hiding? do I need to solve that riddle before I can read it? you cant leave me without anymore to read! that's just mean!!
I have got to say that this is probably the best Twilight-centric Shipping Fic i've ever read.
Gotta admit though, i'm still cheering for Spitfire. It's simply a pairing that seems pretty rare, and the way you set up the possibility is a stroke of genius!!!
I can't wait for the next great chapter!
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She does have an impressive one, doesn't she? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
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Thank you. Not sure how long it's going to last. I only know the ending(s), not how I'm going to get there. Cue song: Road to Nowhere. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
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Wow! Glad you liked my story so much. Don't worry. Chapter 14 is still in production. I am curious how you arrived at those scores, though.
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Thank you. And yeah, Firelight is a pretty rare shipping. I had no idea Spitfire had such a huge following here (or was it just that all the Spitfire fans somehow found my story?). Funny thing is, since I had to make up almost everything about her, she practically feels like an OC to me. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_rape.png
you know it would be great if twilight ended up dating one of the three competitors friends like soarin or big mac
I swear if Cheerllee wins this in any other way than the harlem method I am going to literally jump off a bridge. It will help me calm dow its not suicide its extreme sports
Somepony needs to break the ice...and it's not going to be pretty... Also I loved the RariJack/PieDash scenes here. Very cute. And oh you innocent you are, Twilight...
You are seriously causing me to consider moving the official "best pony tiara" from Rarity to Twilight...no...must...remain...fabulous...
that's my favourite riddle :3
A Shadow!!!
im loving this story so far heheheh
I could only think of dust as an answer to that riddle. Let's see what it is.
A shadow.Too easy.Try this.
A painting,I have no frame,
No gallary exhibits me;
Here today,tomorrow I move;
Yet I am as permanent as life itself.
A painting,I use no canvas,
Yet my canvas is the essence of life;
No brush was used in my creation,
But colors are mine to display.
A painting.Who am I?
And what does an Italian river have to do with this?The sphinx is Egyptian,the humans are gone,and there was no river in this chapter.
...-facehoofs-Ok.Now I understand.Vital in Romes protection.They cross it,it's the point of no return.
Only one color, but not one size,
Stuck at the bottom, yet easily flies,
Present in sun, but not in rain,
Doing no harm, and feeling no pain.
I just love these riddles that you have in here even though I will never be able to solve them. Onward to the next chapter! Keep up the great writing!
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scenery?
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Dafuq do you get this riddles from?!?!
Sorry, but this bugs me everywhere I see it.
Have you actually looked into another person's eyes for literally minutes?
It's painful, seems like it'll last forever.
Either way, you don't stare in somebody's eyes for minutes without one of them doing something to stop it.
/rant
the answer to the riddle at the end is: a shadow......
Ha-Ha! For once I get the reference in the chapter title.
The riddle at the end is the ONLY riddle I can remember being able to solve. It's a shadow.
I'm guessing the next chapter those three will finally tell twi. I look forward to that
i think that was supposed to be in regular type...not italic.
...unles she was thinking that to herself.
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the sunrise/sunset
Answer: a shadow
I absolutely love the riddle at the end, for shadows are my favorite 'thing' ( the apostrophe set is because shadows aren't really a thing ) in the world. I hope I never go blind.
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the sky?
very nice. I am waiting for the trio to shout 'i love you' at once and then growl at each other
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In retrospect, that would have been funny.