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The eyes... THE EYES! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
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42 on Cheerilight. It seems you think you possess the ultimate answer. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
Awesome job on the SpitLight!!!
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100 bits on Spitfire.
ALL MY MONEY ON SPITFIRE!!!! ALL OF IT! <One question though, what's so special about the book exactly?>
Well Hot damn. things are getting heated in here. any possibility of a menage-a-quatre in that book?
“Come on, Candy Ass. Let's get to bed". I see somepony has read Lyra and Bon-bons odd jobs.
I Know a pony who knows a pony The ultimate in non-answers
1355829 42 may be the ultimate answer, but what is the question, of life the universe and everything?
1355958 Aside from the excitement of it being a very rare book, Tantra is a sexual discipline that trains people to experience greater pleasure through self control. through control the moment of pleasure can last far longer.
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Kinky.
Personally? I'm betting on an All for one and one for All solution. The three will probably learn to share Twi. Anything else will probably result in a lot of broken hearts. Though honestly of the three I wouldn't mind it too much if Trixie had her heart broken. Not because I dislike Trixie so much as I feel that Trixie and Twilight are overused to death. The most interesting pairing here in my mind is FireLight.
Well it's confirmed Spitfire is definitely best pony for Twilight.
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Something tells me we're going to end up with two pair instead of four of a kind. I won't put bits on this one, though my hopes are on SparkleSpit. I'm a sucker for non-traditional / uncommon ship pairings, especially well-done ones like we're seeing here.
God, it gets worse!
Unfortunately for Trixie, the only pony that doesn't have a chance is Trixie. She loves Twilight probably the most out of all of them, but a relationship should be reciprocal... And there really isn't much Trixie has to offer. It's kind of heartbreaking, really. There's no possible way Trixie could ever repay Twilight's selfless kindness. She's just a worthless, washed-up magician in a country where a third of the population knows magic anyways. Cheerilee's a beautiful, brilliant teacher, and Spitfire's a gorgeous athletic celebrity. There's no competition.
For a while, I thought Spitfire was kind of in the same boat, but this chapter proves otherwise. I mean, wow. I thought Cheerilee pretty much had this.
I'm still betting that Cheerilee wins and Trixie and Spitfire hook up, though. The friendship is already there.
*Insert usual comment about me rooting for Cheerilight still*
That's it. Spitfire will win. Put 1,000 bits on it. If she doesn't win . . .
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Drag this out any longer and I'll write three separate endings just to shut my brain up!
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Affection rarely has anything to do with what someone has to offer, Trixie has just as much chance as the other two.
More in fact, I think her date was the most heartfelt and poignant of the three, it was almost enough to make me change my vote to Twixie.
I am a little let down by Spitfire's date, but it fits her attraction to Twilight to a T, given that hers began as a crush based on physical attraction. It's just a shame that I see it as the weakest of the three.
I'm still rooting for her though!
I stand by the belief that Spitfire will win! In light of this fact, i bet the Entire Internet!!!
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Eh, yeah, you're right. And if Celestia likes her, she can't be half bad. Still wonder what they talked about. Trixie's hardly a saint, so she had to have made a pretty damn good case for herself. And their first date was pretty heartfelt.
But, I guess what I really mean is that Trixie wouldn't be happy just dangling off of Twilight like a parasite. She WANTS to repay her. Whether or not she figures out how is what will determine if she wins her heart, or feels like she deserves it.
Oh, boy! After reading Cheerilee's chapter, I was afraid she would have this in the bag. Trixie's was sweet, but I just don't see her and Twilight getting together. Twilight is selfishly kind, and Trixie is an arrogant, confident showmare. I just don't see it working out in ANY fic featuring Trixie and Twilight, no matter how many times the author insists Trixie has changed for the better.
After this chapter, though, it really impresses me on how hard Spitfire has been really trying here. Cheerilee is a schoolteacher, so she already understands "technical conversation" even if she does not fully understand magic. Spitfire, on the other hoof, is a Pegasus. Normally Pegasi just don't pay much attention to magic. But Spitfire, she's thrown her entire being into gathering what knowledge she can so she can prove to Twilight just how much Spitfire loves her. I can just imagine all the studying and researching Spitfire has done in whatever spare time she can find so she can impress the mare she has always loved.
To be honest, I'll probably end up bawling my eyes out if Spitfire does not get Twilight. Not gonna lie. Waiting for more.
Hm. Nice job with this date. I admit I haven't been too fond of Spitfire, but the relationship here works.
...
Still voting Cheerilight or all at once.
Ugh
This is like a freakin pc anime date-sim game! So many cute girls, so many sad or interesting stories behind them! Spitfire: childhood crush, Trixie: tsundere, Cheerilee: teacher, you have all three archatypes in the same fic, BRILLIANT!!!
Anyway, liken all of the ships, and I know you're not going to answer this but I'm still going ask...WHO THE BUCK IS BEHIND THIS SECRET AGENT, CIA, COVERT OPS, PROTECTION DETAIL!!??
Cheerilight, Spitlight, Twixie, why must she choose ONLY ONE!!!? Everypony chant with me, chant with me if you wish to see the fullfillment of all their love! TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem, TwiHarem,!!!!!
Wow. With all this praise, I'm getting kinda worried I won't be able to deliver on the ending. This is kinda overwhelming. I just hope that there's no hard feelings when the pairing a person is rooting for doesn't win... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
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Thank you kindly.
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One of these days, I'm gonna go through the comments and count up everyone who sides with a pony, and see who's really popular. But it's going to have to wait until the final chapter since I don't want to be influenced too much. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
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In a book on Tantric magic? Never happen. :P You're pretty close actually. I was referencing the story Wake. I tried reading Lyra and Bonbon's Odd Jobs, but that protest scene in front of the clinic kinda killed it for me. It was a well-written story, but I got so angry at the protesters (few things rile me like people protesting stupid things), that I was literally shaking with anger. That's when I realized that I needed to step away from that and go read something cute. Possibly with bunnies. And thanks for setting Bairiko on the path of knowledge.
Oh, and "How many roads must a man walk down." dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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Three Musketeers solution, eh?
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But doesn't four of a kind beat two pair?
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I'm glad I can still keep people guessing. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cloudchaser_dealwithit.png
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Hey, you're welcome to try. Just be warned that the cheering section is scary!
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Well said. As I said to earlier commentators (I think it was around chapter 15 or 16), that love isn't about who deserves it most. It is, what it is.
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If you want to know, her case went something like this: "I love Twilight with all my heart and will give up everything I have including my life and freedom to be with her." Or to put it another way....
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The first chapter pretty well sums up what she did to try to win Twilight's heart. And yes, she worked her flank off to get where she is today. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_rape.png
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I totally did not peg Trixie as a tsundere, but you're right! She totally is the bitch with a heart of gold. (please Trixie, don't hurt me!). I won't answer your question here, but it is forthcoming in the story.
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I don't think you truly understand what you have unleashed. You've successfully balkanized your reader base. Regardless of your blog post, you will face the wrath of thousands(okay maybe hundreds) of nerds. Who will not rest till them extract the ending they want from you(or get distracted by something else, whichever comes first).
Your safest path is do a canon ending, then give two alternates, plus a harem one, then do your sequel. Go the dating sim route.
PS.
Where are you getting custom emoticons? I want some.
“And then- and then, after all that bother, she went with the turtle anyway!”
Fluttershy suddenly appears from off-screen, "Tortoise" .
I must say, I'm a little let down with Spitfire's date. I was expecting something much more flashy and exuberant, although as always I'm very impressed with the dedication Spitfire showed in learning magic for the mare she loves. I think almost anypony would feel like they had a dragon by the tail when talking magic with Twilight, so the fact that she's there and not feeling like she's been left adrift at sea (having a technical job I know I do that to people sometimes) shows just how much she's worked at it.
I was so certain that she'd finally be the one to get her confession out fully though, and while she let something slip that might be considered far more , she never actually said "I love you".
1356818 Hey, can't blame a guy for trying As far as the tsundere thing, I just calls'em like I sees'em:
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Every tsundere character I ever see, I hate. I just want to reach out, grab them and shake them while screaming "If you like them don't treat them like shit just be kind and loving what the hell is wrong with you?" Trixie is no exception and it's why I pretty much hate Trixie any time that she's portrayed in-character.
SPITFIRE's date FINALLY! I'm mean it not like I WAITED the WHOLE STORY for this BUT, I glad I came when it did I really enjoyed it.
Also how many for spitfire
1356818 oh and I REALLY Like that song so thank you
I really cant see how Spitfire could lose!
Hmm I must say that i am putting 1000 bits on FireLight
I don't see what a cloudwalking spell is doing in the frontal lobes. Motor cortex is understandable(though yea, medulla might work better so you don't fall through a cloud after being knocked out).
Was it's presence in the frontal lobe just Starswirl being fancy again?
It's not a harem, it's a herd, with Twilight as the alpha. And I notice that you have them all working together to keep the dates going smoothly, and they all discover things about each other that they admire. So you're creating mutual appreciation as well as the affection for Twilight.
I say TwiFire, only because its so rare, and only if there isn't an all ending up with Twilight ending.
I vote for harem ending, proposed by the suitors.
...I love Spitfire... but my vote is still on Cheerie
That... made me both and at the same time... you, sir, are a genius. It!
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Who the fuck let someone steal my chant!
Threesome. Threesome. Threesome. Threesome. Threesome. Threesome...
Please be a threesome...
1356239>>1356305 I'm right there with you two.
Gotta say, Spitfire did a fine job.
Still hoping for Cheerilight though.
Fantastic as usual, Wrabbit.
Spitfire is def choice for me.
All three love Twilight and she loves all of them but i have to wonder the same thing as Celestia ...
Can any of them keep up with her?
That quiet librarian will probably be the next Starswirl the Bearded. (and just might surpass him eventually)
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But, I don't want to be Soviet Russia...
The extra emoticons come from a program you can add to your Firefox browser called Greasemonkey. You'll need to then go here to upload the fimfiction set. I'd give you the direct url myself, but my computer seems to be acting up today and only loads pages when it feels like it.
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Heh heh. Tortoise. Sorry about the let down. It was only after reading your comment that I thought of the perfect thing she could have done that the others couldn't. I'll probably include it later on in the story though.
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Glad you liked it.
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You're welcome.
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Don't count your pegasi before they... foal. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_sad.png
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I have to ask, were you all Spitfire fans before reading my story, or is it just my characterization of her/choices provided? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia2.png
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Actually, it was a pony named Flashbang that made the spell, and yes, he ran it through the frontal lobe to be fancy, and to have more conscious control over it. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
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Herd, huh? I suppose it is technically correct (the best kind of correct). And, yeah, they're really coming to respect if not like each other as well. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png
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Proposed by the suitors? There's a twist!
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Snowflake should appear in every story at least once, even if he doesn't say "YEAH!" dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png
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A very valid question, sir/madam. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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I enjoyed Spitfire before reading this story, but I never thought of shipping her with Twilight. It was always Dash or Soarin. I came in supporting Twilight/Trixie though.
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Tell Berry I wanna put a thousand on spitfire.
also, EEEEE! Spitfire finally gets her turn!
... is it a sad thing it only just occurred to me that she was named after the plane?
I always found it funny that Rainbow, the element of Loyalty, can't work well with others, and that Applejack is always called the most dependable of ponies.
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I posted a comment about this a long time ago in this story. It's could likely be referencing the WW2 British Spitfire, but "Spitfire" is also a term for a woman with a fierce/fiery personality.
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I'm curious, was it having the Wonderbolts do some sky writing? because that's what I had in my mind this whole time .
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His will be done.
1355928>>1355958>>1356313 just to let u all know I've got 2 million on spitfire and 1 million on our favourite teacher.... so who the big roller now???
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The second one is what I assumed originally, but I think it's more likely that her character went name(plane)->personality, where her personality was inspired by the second meaning of her name.
Twilight is so adorkable!
Hm, it was kind of a lack-luster that date. I expected more grandios fabolousity, something like a "I you, Twilight Sparkle" written with red clouds in the sky when watching the sun set down~ That would have been lovely~ <3
I didn´t really got the book gift to be honest. If Celestia had forbid her to read then that should be something Twi wouldn´t want to break in fear of losing the princess trust making this a BAD gift. Plus the "we could try it out together" part, is that a book for magical sex or something? Cause else it wouldn´t make much sense with Spitfire being a pegasi and thus having no means to perform Unicorn magic.
Huh, this was posted almost two days ago and no one's mentioned the foreshadowing
Twilight: “Let's see, according to my calculations, it should last at a bare minimum, two hundred forty-eight hours, if my math holds.”
“Oh my, yes. The original spell was so inefficient. Can you believe that Flashbang, the original creator of the spell, actually had run the calculations for the power needed using the Starswirl Principle?” She started talking more animatedly now. “You're only supposed to do that for spells that work on a massive scale."
"I also ran the magic through the medulla rather than the cerebral frontal lobe, resulting in a more intuitive spell,"
Spitfire: “But what about overflow? I thought it was a bad idea to run a spell the the baser parts of the brain since it could result in atavism.”
Twilight: “Oh, sure. In the amounts of mana as required by the original spell, atavism might occur, but in the amounts with my recalculations, the odds of that happening are virtually nil.”
Trixie: “Trixie is doing the best she can, but these notes Twilight made are difficult enough to decipher without plebes like you breaking her concentration.”
"It galled her to admit that, even to herself. Trixie had always prided herself on her magical prowess, but that night in Ponyville when the Ursa Minor showed up, she realized just how little she knew about magic, and how lacking her education truly was."
So to recap there are two versions of the Cloud Walking spell one that uses a crap-load of power that runs through the frontal lobe and a more efficient low powered version that can be safely run through the medulla. Both have an obscenely long duration. Trixie is self-taught and doesn't know many basic magic principles or safety precautions. Twilight's notes from which Trixie learned the spell likely contained both versions of the spell but are really technical and hard to read. Running too much power in the wrong part of the brain causes Atavism. In this context I assume that means instinctual regression and acting less consciously and more primal. This story is labeled as a clopfic.
I bet my Xbox 360 on spitfire winning...
If I loose, your still not getting it
Anywho keep going, this is really drawing my attention from the other fics