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Twilight begins to hear a ticking when she starts to think of all the ways she could fail the princess and her friends, the ticking in her head causes her illness and eventually leads her to iNsANiTY.

Chapters (3)

Tick Tock Tick Tock... · 16th Sep 2015 · 9,214 words
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Epilouge · 30th Nov 2015 · 1,005 words
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Alternate ending · 30th Nov 2015 · 1,559 words
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StarsketchDF

StarsketchDF #1 · Sep 16th, 2015 · · · Tick Tock Tick Tock... ·

I'm going to make a cover picture when its finished.

Golden Touch

Golden Touch #2 · Sep 18th, 2015 · · · Tick Tock Tick Tock... ·

After reading through the chapter and finding things here and there. I'd have to say you need to think more about how you describe things as well as how you put them. 'She rocked to sleep'. That did not make too much sense in my mind. The idea of the fanfiction is plausible since such enormous stress that would be put on Twilgihts shoulders would cause any person to become insane. Although I did enjoy it, It still needs work

StarsketchDF

StarsketchDF #3 · Sep 18th, 2015 · · · Tick Tock Tick Tock... ·

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Thanks I'll work on it.

Dashur

Dashur #4 · Sep 25th, 2015 · · · Tick Tock Tick Tock... ·

can't wait to read this when it's done , really good so far

StarsketchDF

StarsketchDF #5 · Sep 29th, 2015 · · · Tick Tock Tick Tock... ·

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Re-read it if you want I fixed a few mistakes and added some minor things so you can get a better picture. Or would you rather read the whole thing over when Its done?