I am a pegasister who likes writing. And ponies. So...yeah. Don't judge my stories too harshly.
Twilight lives in a land of shadows. Her and her friends failed to defeat Nightmare Moon. The Final Twilight changed it all, and the night will last forever.
Readers, I know this story sounds similar to New World: Land of Shadows, but they are not related. Rated Teen for dark elements. Gore tag: I'm not sure if I should have it, but there is blood.
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I like this story, but the events seemed rushed through. It might not hurt if you add as much detail to the events as possible.
I don't care how long it takes for you to do it, but I rather have a nice, long chapter with a lot of detail to it, than a quick one that is short, and very rushed.
*Reads*
Then maybe you shouldn't have chose the "publish" option until it was suitable for readers?
I'll do even better than that: I won't read it ever.
6373742 Well, at first it was suitable, but then somebody said it was kind of rushed, so I started fixing it.
I like this story but it does seem a little rushed. But other from that its good if dispressing.
6374684 interesting start. Don't normally like dark stuff but the idea here intrigues me.