A very interesting idea, I must say I'm a big fan of Silent Hill. And all respects for you, this isn't an easy crossover for a startup! Keep your spirit up, bro and go on! /]
Now LakeyallOfHeartsEves has offered his help already, but if you can still use help from a fellow countryman (and I guess from the untranslated word-pieces in your story, we at least speak the same native language), I'll be glad to help you; four eyes see more than two and six eyes see more than three...
THE FAIR? CAN I GET SO,E TICKETS?
Oh and I will be checking your story for spelling errors c:
Why are your using "Their"? And also magic and comb should be came, Hm... I could spell check this but not very good in the grammar side if you want
I have no problem with jokes or constructive reviews, but please Trying to avoid double posts.
And the magic is still to come![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
A very interesting idea, I must say I'm a big fan of Silent Hill. And all respects for you, this isn't an easy crossover for a startup!
Keep your spirit up, bro and go on!
/]
Now LakeyallOfHeartsEves has offered his help already, but if you can still use help from a fellow countryman (and I guess from the untranslated word-pieces in your story, we at least speak the same native language), I'll be glad to help you; four eyes see more than two and six eyes see more than three...![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
You have to put celestia in there I'd love to see her reaction to this
Sry that it took so long. But here's the next chapter![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
I'm back from vacation in everyday life
Why did you cancel This
Excellent story keep up the good work and are you looking for your next story idear