Pony Hill

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Three months after NightmareMoon was defeated by the Elements of Harmony. Disappeared Princess Luna and.... the night turns into Tartarus!

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Prologue: Gone · 23rd Aug 2015 · 593 words
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First Chapter: Hear! Hear! The Fair is here! · 23rd Aug 2015 · 993 words
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Second Chapter: What are you? · 28th Aug 2015 · 2,112 words
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LakeyallOfHeartsEves

LakeyallOfHeartsEves #1 · Aug 24th, 2015 · · · First Chapter: Hear! Hear! The Fair is here! ·

THE FAIR? CAN I GET SO,E TICKETS?

LakeyallOfHeartsEves

LakeyallOfHeartsEves #2 · Aug 24th, 2015 · · · First Chapter: Hear! Hear! The Fair is here! ·

Oh and I will be checking your story for spelling errors c:

LakeyallOfHeartsEves

LakeyallOfHeartsEves #3 · Aug 24th, 2015 · · · Prologue: Gone ·

Why are your using "Their"? And also magic and comb should be came, Hm... I could spell check this but not very good in the grammar side if you want

Dark Spark

Dark Spark #4 · Aug 24th, 2015 · · · First Chapter: Hear! Hear! The Fair is here! ·

I have no problem with jokes or constructive reviews, but please Trying to avoid double posts.

And the magic is still to come

Scribble Script

Scribble Script #5 · Aug 24th, 2015 · · · First Chapter: Hear! Hear! The Fair is here! ·

A very interesting idea, I must say I'm a big fan of Silent Hill. And all respects for you, this isn't an easy crossover for a startup!
Keep your spirit up, bro and go on!
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Now LakeyallOfHeartsEves has offered his help already, but if you can still use help from a fellow countryman (and I guess from the untranslated word-pieces in your story, we at least speak the same native language), I'll be glad to help you; four eyes see more than two and six eyes see more than three...