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King Sombra and His Loyal Guard

This Story Revolves around The Last Guard Protecting King Sombra even though everyone else hated Sombra He had to protect him at all costs because of what Celestia did to his Comrades in the Final Hours of the Crystal Empire Thunder Lance will try with all his might to protect his King even if he has to die in the process

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Trainfan10

Trainfan10 #1 · Aug 22nd, 2015 · · ·

I would love to read this, but it needs some periods and commas. If it was revised, i could read it.

Dr_D

Dr_D #2 · Aug 22nd, 2015 · 1 · ·

Wow.
Did you not look over when you wrote at all?
While there were no spelling errors, there was also no periods, commas, quotation marks for dialogue, and no pacing.
This needs some serious editing before I will even bother commenting about the story.

CyberneticBlackjack