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Harmony Note


I'm just a random pony who loves to write, heh. I hope you all enjoy some or most of my work!

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Twilight Sparkle is happily living her life as the Princess of Friendship. However, once the princesses ask Twilight to marry a griffon prince, she might lose her five friends and Spike. She doesn't find this griffon appealing to her at first, but as their relationship progresses, Twilight starts to fall for him, but tries to get rid of her feelings. Even though if she doesn't wed him, there will be a war between Equestria and Griffonstone. It was the only peace-offering the griffons would accept from Celestia and the other princesses.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 10 )

GREAT STORY! I really liked the idea and except for a few parts that felt a little rushed, it was amazing. the only other complaint would be Cadence seen more eager about the wedding then Twilight's feelings. Hope you write more in the future! Also 5 mustaches for you:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

WHY WON'T IT LET ME LIKE THE STORY! IT'S TO GOOD NOT TO BE LIKED!:raritycry::raritydespair:

6342237 Thank you so much! And I kinda figured it would be a bit rushed, I'm not really sure how to fix it and still make it good though, lol.

Magnificent so far...i was able to imagine the whole thing......And i hope it gets more better...And wow Shining took it quite...ok...Either way good job

Nice so far a bit rushed but nice...ill clasify it 9/10

Good job....This is was nice and more relaxing than the earlier chapter but sweet and interesting as the previous..keep it up

Good job....This is was nice and more relaxing than the earlier chapter but sweet and interesting as the previous..keep it up

I need permission to see the wedding dress. can I see it?

Twilight replied, "I can only write to you, but coming home, even for a visit, would mean breaking the treaty. Which would also mean the griffons could attack us and there would be nothing or no pony to stop it."

What if Twilight invited them for a visit?

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