Having lost contact with Sunset Shimmer, Twilight Sparkle rushes into the Crystal Mirror - only to find herself in post-nuclear Canterlot Wastelands... [Fallout/Equestria Girls fusion crossover]
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Well at least Sunset misfortune was short live, though I wonder who the sniper is. Are we gonna see some familiar face soon?
Also nice integration of the Hooffields and McColts.
Fancy way to write "loot"
Ya sure you wrote it right?
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Thanks
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Fixed, thank you.
Honestly, the things that slip past...
Son of a whore i got ten bucks says sci twi was a future tec employee at one point or had access to the facility so there going to do all this prep work for nothing and twi can just walk right on in
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You never know...
Was the 50 cal from one of the roving Players Of Games? As in someone that s not part of the story, or are they going to be introduced and integrated, as I dont know the team work progression method of Fallout, if it exists etc.
What would be the most hilarious would be if SciTwi had a Spike, and used his bark as security, as have you seen how hard it is to get a dog to behave when the owner is stressed or thretened?
Actually, given she dissapeared, what are the current odds that SciTwi is in a cryopod in Future Tech?
.... Just came from a story that was dragging on, read this chapter and... was pleasantly surprised.
That said, I personally am really looking forward to the girls making a bit of meaningful progress toward one of the Big Goals, rather than baby steps forward to a related but minor goal. It'd be nice to get at least something juicy to chew on.
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No. AFAIK the term "fifty-cal" is military jargon for .50 weapons like machine guns or anti-materiel sniper rifles like Barrett.
Indeed.
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I get the feeling - I am itching to get to the large impact chapters myslf - but at this stage the pace can't be too fast. Next chapter will deal with Marehoof (there are some events that must happen there) and show which of two paths to Ponyville the girls will take, and the next chapter after that will be dedicated to the chosen path itself.
Also, there are still players that haven't been introduced yet.
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Very hopefully.
I just am suprised Twilight is not making a big deal about going to Ponyville. I always figured the high school was in Ponyville.
Why do I get the impression that Twilight's human twin might have worked on this sight?
It be kind of silly that they might have had the means to enter the base all along. But I imagine the faces on all those there to witness it would be priceless if it was true.
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High school - you mean the one in EQG movies?
It's called Canterlot High School, so I think that the school was in Canterlot, too.
Although, now that you mention it, I can write some fidgety Twilight in there as the girls and Spike come closer - after all, she hasn't seen the human version of Ponyville.
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You never know...
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I wanted you to
Who knows, who knows?
Alright, finally got a good read of this.
Good chapter overall, even if Sunset's kidnapping turned out to be a bit anti-climactic . I like the additional worldbuilding that you're doing here with the different towns and locales of the western wastelands, and Marehoof sounds like an exciting place; it brings to my mind a wretched hive run by Ivy and multiple other factions aiming for control of the whole town ala New Reno. Maybe its also a place where the populace is kept under economic control by keeping them dependent on some wasteland chem manufactured by one of the factions (like Jet?) Also had a thought that Fluttershy has joined/founded a humanist group like the Followers of the Apocalypse and that one of Pinkie's tagged skills is probably Explosives. Looking forward!
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Thanks the anti-climactic-ness was deliberate, for reasons that are spoilers.
I'm glad; the worldbuilding is a necessity.
Small correction - Ivy Mortis is based in Freemare and not Marehoof, although her influence does stretch there.
No spoilers.
Thanks
As much as I'm enjoying your story, there only one thing that I find increasing annoying . It the heavy metaphor and slimily you do while writing. It goes beyond the point and it even used when it not needed. I'm not saying it a bad thing, it just make it hard to focus reading without the added metaphor and stuff being compared to something. "My heart burn like hot lead as I felt sorrow." That type of metaphor, and maybe the over, OVER used of feiry head girl, pony turn human, lavender skin, indigo hair, ect. It just a lot, though I'm not sure if you do this because it add more words to the story or if your trying to add more vivid imagination to it?
But don't let that seem like I'm not enjoying the story, those are just thing that small things bothered me.
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I'm sorry that you find this annoying, but I'm not sure I'll change it. Metaphors and hyperbole are somewhat of an integral part of my writing style. And yes, I use those for more vivid imagination.
Also, I heavily dislike repeating the same name over and over, which is why I resort to skin or hair colour as a way to distinguish the character I refer to.
Aww, thanks. Nice chapter!
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I'm glad you liked it
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Now I'm going to keep waitin for more ^_^
Which version of Fallout is this based on?
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Is it based on Fallout 4?
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Sorry for the late response. I do not always have the ability to answer the comments lately.
This is not based on a single Fallout game, more like on the whole universe. So far I have used elements from Fallout 3 and New Vegas, have plans to introduce some things based on Fallout 4 in the near future, and maybe something that has origins from 1 and 2 may appear as well.
It all depends on what element from which game suits the plot best.
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Nice.
You know what would be a plot twist? Fluttershy survived. She charmed all the animals, even mutated ones, and became the Queen. The animals corner the girls, and Fluttershy reunites with them.
Or you could just kill her off. Whichever.
This is actually what inspired me to play Fallout. Thanks!
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That kinda gives me Queen of Blades (from StarCraft) vibes
I'm afraid I won't survive fandom's wrath if it happens
There are other plans for Fluttershy.
You're welcome
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Just a few ideas I might use them.
Did Sci-Twi work at Future-Tec? I keep thinking that Twilight should be recognized
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I have no idea
Little Pony's Walk or Route 25? Hmmm.......I don't know. But I will just keep waiting patiently til the next chapter comes out.
I must congratulate you on such successful blending of the Fallout games with MLP. I can clearly see CWN being similar to Fallot 3s plot line while having having the BoS faction be similar to Fallot: New Vegas. All the while set in a region with attributes from Fallout 4 mostly being the BoS power armor. All in all a very well written story feels like any of those three games without missteps.
Just finished reading chapter 31 and I am still fighting the tears I really want to hate you for making her audio-recordings (doing my best to not spoil it) I knew it happen from earlier in the story as well as know whathappens to the body by radiation poisoning, but "Dark" feels to be a barely true category for this story (though I am mostly saying this because those logs hit hard but I'm sure there are worse out there that I refuse to try and find for fear of insanity). Even through all this I will be continuing on though firstly I plan on reading some feelgood stories with her bing a major character with a "comedy" tag because my heart wants to stop after reading her logs but for some stupid reason I went back and reread them I think 3 more times each time adding more tears. I respect you abilities with writing and will continue reading later after I can get over how well you wrote that for it to be so distressing but I don't leave good books unfinished even if some parts will threaten to break me down into a fit of tears, so far it was only those logs in chapter 31. My main reason for this extra part is to exclaim how while wanting to hate you I am very very impressed with the writing even though I wish it wasn't but alas the would be cruel to force an writer to not do their best simply because it was so realistic that the read may very likely break into tears. So even though I've been ranting about how depressing that was thing of this whole thing as a compliment not the complaint it sounds like. Hopefully this makes sense to you that this isn't a complaint that lots may think I am not doing this to be rate you or your work but as a WY to express how effective you writing was to get such an emotional response. (And yes from now on to forever I will always ALWAYS have a sentimental fluff story for backupwhen reading a "dark" story this was inspired by you but I am an idiot for not planning with something like that beforehand but then again I wasn't sure if I would actually read it as far as I have so far, I plan to continue but I didn't expect to be pulled in this far.)
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In retrospect, Braeburn would indeed most likely use "body" instead of "organism". Fixed.
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My bad, fixed.
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Fixed.
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Also fixed.
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It appears that, according to this, that I was using the plural form that rose in computer enthusiast circles, referring to malware. Since I was used to seeing this particular version, I extrapolated it to biological viruses.
I'm not very willing to trust Wikipedia, but other links seemed to support this. Now should be fixed.
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Also fixed. Thank you for pointing all of this out
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You do it the answer is coming...
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Thank you I do not focus on any specific game and try to mesh the whole Fallout universe itself, that's why there are various elements from all games.
I am very flattered by your praise I do my best to make good parts for my story, be it heart-warming moments or events of woe. I will endeavour to make more good moments for the story.
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After Chapter 25, Lyra and Bon Bon stay in Appletown for a while, but later they play a part in the story again.
Their storyline, while being secondary, has ties to some plot moments further down the line, so that's not the last you should see of them.
You know when you really get latched onto a story when all you do is read it for the last week and have already caught up with! I must say, you really did a great job getting the reader hooked into the story as I have. I really love the similar characteristics and aspects that you've tied in from the Fallout games into this as well.
Can't wait for more!
The Wasteland Brony
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My profound thanks for your words
I hope you will enjoy future chapters of this story as well!
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I am not planning to end it right now, don't worry. I have recently updated another story that was without my attention for a too long time, so I am going back to this one for now.
I finished this story in 4 days...I cannot wait for the next chapter. I couldn't put it down! I do wonder though with all these adventures, will Twilight and Shimmer become an item given their closeness and the situations they're in? Or will Flash Sentry and Twilight? Being a romantic, I would LOVE to see Twilight and Sunset become an item. It just seems much more plausible than Twilight and Flash at this point in the tale.
I say that they go down a DIFFERENT highway, and stumble across a little pink girl in a yellow radsuit.
Can Blackjack enter the scene ? Maybe some kind of timetravel when she's immortal now ? You know, for fun. (IT'S BLACKJACK) That would make it a loooot nicer :D
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Glad that you liked it that much
Truth be told, I never planned for an actual romance happening in this story (although I won't say there aren't fluffy moments in the plans for the future) between Twilight and anyone. My own shipping preferences go towards Twilight/Flash, though.
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Reference to "Fallout Equestria: Pink Eyes", I presume?
Sorry, nothing like that is in the plans. This story is separate from Kkat's "Fallout: Equestria" anyway, so aside from some non-direct references (if there's a time and place), there's no connection between that universe and the one I am writing.
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Sorry, but again - nothing like that in the plans. My story and Kkat's story (and all side stories in her universe) are separate.
Thanks for the newest chapter, looking forward to the next one.
Update soon?
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I wish I could update this sooner, but my work stress has unexpectedly increased, and I have run into a snag while trying to link several parts of the chapter's plot in a logical way.
Plus, the chapter is intended to be bigger than usual, so I need more time to work on it.
Rest assured, the story is not dead, although it is slowed down more than I would like.
Funny, this chapter has been uploaded, but I've completely forgot about it . I've read it yesterday and by pure chance
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Who knows?
ERGH MEH GORD THIS IS SO AMAZZIIIINNNNGGGGGG PLEASE CONTINUE AND NEVER STOP!!!!!
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Hmmm, I seem to have missed that tidbit.
Thank you, I hope you will continue reading this story and will enjoy it
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Thank you I am not planning to stop, the story is far from over at this juncture.