Twilight, fascinated by the effects of greed on dragons, designs an experiment with Spike as she attempts to coax the boy into using her body. All in the name of science of course.
6247290 Not really unexpected if that was the plan though. I think that Twilight bit off more than she can chew with the greed thing. Her little experiment is gonna come back to screw her in the ass.
6248879 He's seen Twilight come out of the shower a few times, but that wouldn't make him immune to being nervous with being near naked next to her, since it's the opposite. Twilight was using it justifying the arrangement because he's seen her naked.
But yes I could use a editor. It would probably save me a lot of work rereading my stories over and over again to proofread them. I just don't know how the whole process would work and who would be good and willing to help out.
It sounds more to me like an oustanding "HELL YES!!!" to the possible pregnancy question if it came to it, but it also sounds more like you want to leave it ambiguous so that you don't have to actually write it.
Even if Spike's the Dragonborn or equivalent in this universe fact that he seem more human just with extra features seems to confirm that he and Twilight are at least physically compatible.
There will probably be more to it as the story goes though.
6251075 Don't think I am to lazy to write it though. My last story probably had more pregnancy in it than any other story on fim fiction. It was pretty ridiculous.
I apologize if my previous comment was a bit antagonistic to you; I didn't mean for it to seemed to shown that way. Just that when I see things like that, like in this story, one of the first questions that came to mind is "Are they compatible?". The way you described Spike and made it a point that Spike is drastically different as opposed to the other girls just was asking for answers to some questions that I can assume will be answered as the story goes.
...In short, I should just sit back and watch it unfold, no? Make your opinions based on the whole story, not just a chapter or two.
An interesting story, and I am curious about how it will go story-wise, even if it might be obvious. There are, however, some inconsistencies. Two of which stick out to me most. 1.) Why would Spike have been sleeping in a basket prior to the events of the story? He is human and a teenager, so it doesn't really make much sense. Especially since -- unless he was still extremely short -- would already be too large to use one. 2.) The time is inconsistent. The second journal entry makes it sound like what had been happening in bed with Spike had been happening for days -- if not weeks -- but Twilight talks about going bikini shopping tomorrow in the first chapter, which would set the second as the next day.
6252843 A quote for ma earlier commti should help (by the arthor)
"I think of Spike as the dovahkiin, minus all the magic, Twilight has that part. Meanwhile Flash Sentry is the one busy taking arrows to the knee.
But really more along the sense of Spike being a dragon boy, who just looks and functions like a regular human, but with some differences, like the whole greed thing making them large. Or something like increased senses, I'll be touching on that next chapter. I won't be touching pregnancy in this story though, just choosing to ignore it like a lot of people do."
>"“Well I’ve learned my lesson, unless me and the girls develop some exhibitionism fetishes anytime soon, I’m doing my bikini shopping here!”" >Blows him in a changing stall in that same store 5 minutes later
Looks like all the hyper-anxiety attacks Twilight got turned inwards on her and made her a sex fiend. She should be careful, Spike might just end up getting larger only in certain areas
You have made Spilight! And what a great one so far, please write more of this terrific story(and yes I know it's clop but I'll take what I can get) so that the void of Spilight shippings can be filled.
Twilight, I don't think you thought this whole xxxperiment through. Now you just unleashed a monster that could potentially grow tentacles because why the hell not?
6252697 And for why he would be in a basket as opposed to a bed, dragon instincts - despite a human frame - might push him to curl up on a pile, in which case a basket would actually be more comfortable than a bed.
One, will it expand beyond Twilight and Spike? (I can go either way here). Two, are Twilight and Spike breeding compatible? (I'm sure pregnancy won't happen within the story, but I want to know if they have a family type future in their future in that regard.)
yush~
........that was unexpected
Yes. So good.
She's gonna be a very good slut after Spike fucks her brains out. A good little bitch.
that was great kinda reminds me of the story twilights treatment keep up the good work
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Not really unexpected if that was the plan though. I think that Twilight bit off more than she can chew with the greed thing. Her little experiment is gonna come back to screw her in the ass.
6248066 ..............*smiles*
So how big is spike compared to twilight? Shorter? Same height? As the story progresses will his height as well?
6248487 At first he was shorter, but I'm making him taller in the next chapter.
Serves that little tempting vixen right! Besides, that's kind of the point of her entire sexperiment, isn't it? Spike's just...expediting the process.
6248350 Your picture scares me.
6248692 The Adventures of Daring Do-Ra the Explorer was my attempt to copyright infringe on two kid's cartoon charters at the same time.
6248766 Think of Twilight as 5 foot 10. Spike would be around 6 foot 6. Just cause.
6248879 He's seen Twilight come out of the shower a few times, but that wouldn't make him immune to being nervous with being near naked next to her, since it's the opposite. Twilight was using it justifying the arrangement because he's seen her naked.
But yes I could use a editor. It would probably save me a lot of work rereading my stories over and over again to proofread them. I just don't know how the whole process would work and who would be good and willing to help out.
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You could go bigger tho
well..............
*CHOOO!!! CHOOO!!!* all aboard the rape train!, next stop twispike central! Last call for the rape train!,*WHISPLE*
*worst*
there are no brakes on the rape train! WOO WOO!!!!
the fuck train has no brakes!
Redundant statement is redundant.
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It sounds more to me like an oustanding "HELL YES!!!" to the possible pregnancy question if it came to it, but it also sounds more like you want to leave it ambiguous so that you don't have to actually write it.
Even if Spike's the Dragonborn or equivalent in this universe fact that he seem more human just with extra features seems to confirm that he and Twilight are at least physically compatible.
There will probably be more to it as the story goes though.
6251075 Don't think I am to lazy to write it though. My last story probably had more pregnancy in it than any other story on fim fiction. It was pretty ridiculous.
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I apologize if my previous comment was a bit antagonistic to you; I didn't mean for it to seemed to shown that way. Just that when I see things like that, like in this story, one of the first questions that came to mind is "Are they compatible?". The way you described Spike and made it a point that Spike is drastically different as opposed to the other girls just was asking for answers to some questions that I can assume will be answered as the story goes.
...In short, I should just sit back and watch it unfold, no? Make your opinions based on the whole story, not just a chapter or two.
6248791 ... Twilight's as tall as i am, and Spike makes me look like a midget...
6251598 *nods head* Nice.
An interesting story, and I am curious about how it will go story-wise, even if it might be obvious. There are, however, some inconsistencies. Two of which stick out to me most.
1.) Why would Spike have been sleeping in a basket prior to the events of the story? He is human and a teenager, so it doesn't really make much sense. Especially since -- unless he was still extremely short -- would already be too large to use one.
2.) The time is inconsistent. The second journal entry makes it sound like what had been happening in bed with Spike had been happening for days -- if not weeks -- but Twilight talks about going bikini shopping tomorrow in the first chapter, which would set the second as the next day.
6252697 Spike was much shorter at the start of the story, so I just pictured him in a extra large basket.
And they had to delay their beach trip because of Rainbow Dash's weather, so Twilight must've felt like delaying her shopping as well.
Wait a minute... but this is tagged Human! Shouldn't Spike be Anthro if He's a dragon?
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Once again, I'm inclined to question Fimfiction's feature box.
6252843 A quote for ma earlier commti should help (by the arthor)
"I think of Spike as the dovahkiin, minus all the magic, Twilight has that part. Meanwhile Flash Sentry is the one busy taking arrows to the knee.
But really more along the sense of Spike being a dragon boy, who just looks and functions like a regular human, but with some differences, like the whole greed thing making them large. Or something like increased senses, I'll be touching on that next chapter. I won't be touching pregnancy in this story though, just choosing to ignore it like a lot of people do."
There you go.
6254177 Is it bad my head auto-corrected and went on as if it was normal without realizing it? ha
6248791 i have to ask this but are you just making it just clop or a clop with a good story.
I have not seen a good one in sometime that's why i ask
>"“Well I’ve learned my lesson, unless me and the girls develop some exhibitionism fetishes anytime soon, I’m doing my bikini shopping here!”"
>Blows him in a changing stall in that same store 5 minutes later
Looks like all the hyper-anxiety attacks Twilight got turned inwards on her and made her a sex fiend. She should be careful, Spike might just end up getting larger only in certain areas
God bless you kind sir(or madam, I don't judge)
You have made Spilight! And what a great one so far, please write more of this terrific story(and yes I know it's clop but I'll take what I can get) so that the void of Spilight shippings can be filled.
Ship is a sheep
Gods... That Spike is quite the lucky bastard !! X)
Twilight, I don't think you thought this whole xxxperiment through. Now you just unleashed a monster that could potentially grow tentacles because why the hell not?
Looking forward to more of this.
Ha! That's one of the better spelling mistakes I've come across.
6258033 It's so great, I'm going to play it off as an Easter egg for those who read closely enough, and fix it while you are distracted.
6258040 Hahaha
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And for why he would be in a basket as opposed to a bed, dragon instincts - despite a human frame - might push him to curl up on a pile, in which case a basket would actually be more comfortable than a bed.
I have two questions regarding this story.
One, will it expand beyond Twilight and Spike? (I can go either way here).
Two, are Twilight and Spike breeding compatible? (I'm sure pregnancy won't happen within the story, but I want to know if they have a family type future in their future in that regard.)
6258634 I've thought of Twilight hatching some plans to get her other friends involved, but I would probably continue it in a different story.
And I think I will make Twilight and Spike compatible here. I just won't be mentioning it in the story.
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Alright. Though, in the current scheme of things, it looks more like it might be Spike's decision whether to get the other girls involved.
And that's good to hear.
6274031 I have no idea.
6258033
Speaking of Violent panties... 1:20 starts the fun.