I am enjoying this story very much, even more so than a lot of the other story that have 'sex' as one of the labels, that just through sex in your face from the very start.
All I ask for is that this doesn't get too graphic in terms of juices and where and how deep things are going.
“HYNNNRRRRGH?!” Feather Fall clenched at himself, eyes shrinking into pinpricks. The cute! It was too much! Overload! OVERLOAD! He fell over, crashing into a water barrel that was at the end of a storm spout. The barrel split, deluging him with water. Soaked to the bone, he convulsed for a moment. His heart! HIS HEART! Mountain and Caramel came stampeding over. Mountain punched his chest a few times until he started breathing again. Ponies were staring, so they quickly propped him up again. “Is this what I’ve been doing to ponies?!” he cried, hooves on his head. “Celestia’s teats!” he said. “I should wear a blindfold or something!”
These three are focused on the job. I wonder whether Twilight would respond well to a survey. As opposed to being asked straight up. Perhaps in a sciencttific styled approach she'd be more comfortable?
Then again I guess they could showcase various things and see if any spark her interest.
6250781 although a survey could have an opposite effect, causing Twilight to stress out about how she answered the questions...oh...clever... make Twi stressed=going to harem=opportunity...
I'm worried no doubt Pinkie is going to appear, stalk them, and then eavesdrop on their private conversation with Twilight (as Pinkie seems to have no sentiment towards privacy).
Wow, it seems it's Feather's turn to suffer from cuteness overload.
Haha, Feather you've just been out-cuted! What do mean that isn't a word, it is now!
Lmfao When the cuteness is turned back on those who use it as a weapon. That is hilarious!
Balance is restored!
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Poetic justice
I love these guys so much. The friendly business approach to a harem is brilliant.
Yes Feather. That is what you have been doing to us all.
Came in expecting clop. Did not get clop. Was pleasantly surprised.
6249304 Yes very much so
S'good. S'like a well done story.
Because who doesn't love a field trip?
I SHIP THEM !!!!!!!feather shy forever or at least in this story.
I am enjoying this story very much, even more so than a lot of the other story that have 'sex' as one of the labels, that just through sex in your face from the very start.
All I ask for is that this doesn't get too graphic in terms of juices and where and how deep things are going.
Feathershy! If he's adorable, and she's adorable, then think of the FOALS!
This won't end well for any of them.
Let's keep going!
6249746 Do you have any idea what that would cause? The universe would fucking implode from all of that cuteness in one place!
Best reaction EVER!!!!
Came for the sex, stayed for the plot. This story turned out to be even better than I expected!
6249791 WORTH IT!!!!
This story just gets better and better
These three are focused on the job. I wonder whether Twilight would respond well to a survey. As opposed to being asked straight up.
Perhaps in a sciencttific styled approach she'd be more comfortable?
Then again I guess they could showcase various things and see if any spark her interest.
Fluttershy enters the scene
D'awwwww.... huh... HYRRRNNNNGH!? My heart...
Love it, keep up the good work
6250781 although a survey could have an opposite effect, causing Twilight to stress out about how she answered the questions...oh...clever... make Twi stressed=going to harem=opportunity...
Commence read.
HA! A taste of your own medicine, Feather Fall finally gets it.
I'm worried no doubt Pinkie is going to appear, stalk them, and then eavesdrop on their private conversation with Twilight (as Pinkie seems to have no sentiment towards privacy).
Oh, for the love of the Sisters... this is going to be priceless.
Also Feather dealing with Fluttershy is adorable as fuck.
... I'm waiting for them to run into Pinkie. Or Mountain dealing with AJ and Dash.
This is fun, a little off the mold of your usual stories, but fun. As always, I love your Twilight.
I'm really enjoying this story!
Keep up the good work!
“No, she comes her to indulge herself.
*here
Above expectations my friend
That nearly made a very big mess of my pc. XD I should really not drink while reading stories like this.
'Kay, faving this now.
-ded- Too...cute....
I really like this fic but could u mabey make the parts longer? I feel like their over too quickly.