.... Make this clop and you have a fave.

This seems like an interesting story. You get a fav.

Keep this clean (non-clop) and you have a fave.

Plus I think this has a lot of potential to be a fic with a rather good story to it. It'd be a shame to spoil it with clop material.

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An interesting concept and start to a story. I rather like it. Take a fav from me

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This thing seems to be near predestined for clop... also, I've read plenty of stories where the story wasn't impeded, but rather extended and elaborated upon because of the clop. It's an opportune moment to explore some very intimate subjects. Granted, it's easy to over-do the clop and overrun the story with it but a scene or two here or there wouldn't be bad.

Examples:
"In cadence minor" (explores the effects of how traumatic events can affect a relationship, both in and out of the bedroom)

A certain 2nd person POV fic whichs name escapes me at the moment starring rarity and a human (explores the growth and trials of a relationship through various semi-mundane difficulties with surprisingly strong impacts)

And, while this one might be an example of clop gone overboard since a large majority of the story is based around sexual relationships, the "Trixie's Magic Bit" series of fics (Does a LOT of exploration into how and why people have the desires they do including various unconventional ones.)

So... to add to the current theme... Make this a good read with a side of tasteful clop, and you can keep the fav I'm giving you.

Uhhh... This is going to be really doofer, isn't it?

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Well I can tell you it's not going to be clean, but it's not going to be a full-on porno either, haha.

This is more of a "wants and needs" sort of thing. Celestia needs ponies that treat her normally. Luna probably needs close friends and acclimation training. Twilight, to be perfectly frank, needs a bit of exposure to the opposite sex (but that's just my opinion of the poor thing). There's gonna be some lewdness, they are a HAREM after all-- but I'm not setting up for a down-and-dirty clop-fic, haha. Sorry to any hopefuls. <:)

6228363 Still, you can't have a clean version and a clop version?

Commence read.

Glad to see something brewing about.

Harry Potter shenanigans.

Guess Feather Fall takes the current lead.

Hot damn, a new story! *happy flail!*

I can see naïve Twilight not thinking any sexual thoughts whatsoever.

...or not.

...wut.

>adventure

I'm sure this will be an adventure, all right.

best string of insults ever...i must memorise it

T rated harem story, this should be interesting, faved.

Refreshing ! I want more. I bet it's gonna be pretty funny.

Interesting... More please. :)

H'okay.

I'll... I'll just go to the next chapter then.

Gosh, they're all adorable. Even Mountain Blood, in his own horrible way.

The description of a comfortable environment really stood out for me.

Warm milk? That is just what I needed! thanks.

~Leonzilla

PS: 100th up vote

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That is exactly the potential that I saw. I like the idea of royalty having a special room and special ponies to treat them just like any other pony would and keep them up to date with normal pony things, along with the idea of a "get-away" room. Nice combination.

Carry on good sir!

“Shit ass bitch fuck cunt neigh-hova’s witness bicycle-eater,”

That is going in my Book of Insults

I love this premise.

Expecting the stereotype, and was facepalming at the absolutely horrid minded humor of Mountain Blood.
Also, bandwagon.

Shit ass bitch fuck cunt neigh-hova’s witness bicycle-eater

Mountain Blood. That name just screams "Miner", as does his description.
Mind if I borrow him for a story I have in mind? I need someone who seems like the type that would put in a 10 hour shift underground, pulling precious metals out of the core of a mountain.

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