Although Hearth's warming is a national holiday, Celestmas is the day many a thousand Years ago that Celestia herself was born...the ponies tell of their favorite times.
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Fastest birth I ever did hear of, and holy moly if that wasn't an abrupt death. =/ I like the moral of this chapter, but didn't really enjoy reading it, although it had the best pacing of the set so far up until I saw that birth/death combo strike home.
Okay, this one is pretty cool, a nice little chapter to finish off on (for me anyways as I did read these in a slightly different order) I like how this one went mainly based on how you showed her reactions and how you lead it into the ending. Coulda been a little more of the concert, but I think you covered it decently enough for what you intended. Good job.
That's the second shock laugh of this story :P I now literally feel heartless, THANKS A LOT!!
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"Fluttershy, is that you?" the small marfe asked, turning her head.
"Yes, I'm sorry, you see, my house burned down earlier..."
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Other than this, it was an okay chapter, not particularly amazing and fairly similar ending to Pinkie's chapter in the receiving of their animal (don't blame you though, it makes sense.)
Out of the six thus far I'd probably rate them: Rainbow Dash - 4/5, Rarity - 3.5/5, Fluttershy 3.5/5, Twilight - 3/5, Pinkie - 2/5, Applejack - 2/5.
This Is Awesome!!!! I Love All Of Them Equally (Except Applejack) You Write Really good Better Then Me Anyway. Keep On!!!!!!
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36391 Well thank ya Bethany
...and watch as canon utterly destroys this fanfic in a month.
Nice reference to Galaxy Girls. Fyre-Frye reference too (Lauren Faust's DA page)
After back-to-back sad stories, I think it's best we got a happy story.
37516 well then i've got a month
can you do luna im curius to what you can do
41783 O ho ho, Luna, that should be fun, and I'll do Celestia's as well
Mmm....... Maybe you could do
?
41801 Trixie, hmm, that is a good one, I'll work that in, it should be out in less than a week.
how about
Wow. Only knew Madame Feather for 2 lines and I hated her.
Felt sort-a rushed. Like, A LOT.
42076v Its Pinkie pie, she would have done exactly that
42080 That will be a challenge, i know a lot less about spike than the others, good idea
Me: Oh. M'kay.
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Who knew Gilda could have been such a humanitarian before she was a jerk?
56608 I know right?
Maybe
57006
Can I have permission to use Celestmas in my new fanfic? please? or I will cry!
ps.The sad part is that I thought I was the first to make up Celestmas.....X| a little too late a guess...
57006
Oh, and can I make up some sort of Santa? mabye a assistant to
?
I have to admit something....I SOBBED DURING HALF OF THE ENTIRE CHAPTER!!!!
MY HEART HURTS!!!!
Seem rushed...really really REALLY rushed...
It's so badly written
.......
If you rewrote it, fixed all the grammar mistakes, gave a thicker plot, fixed the spelling, used the correct names, and had the characters be more like themselves..... I would have made it 5 stars. 2 stars for effort though.
You don't capatilize Rainbow, but you capatilize pegasi?!?!? Fix this story
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It's so ruched
. You're grammar is atrocious!!!
I'm not going to say anything about the grammar, or the rushing, or the badly characterized Rarity. I'm not going to say anything at all....
So....you're house burned down, huh?
Eeeeyuup!
Why are these chapteds so rushed?
Grammar.....is.....atrocious
Badly written.
Well I simply think this could have been better
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Did ya check when the story was published, 13 months ago
Good concept, but everything is so rushed that you don't have time to think about what just happened before something entirely different happens.
. Everything, just kind of, happens, without any rhyme or reason. A for effort, I suppose, but I highly recommend making some changes.