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Huh, kinda filler-y, but good.
I'm glad to see this story didn't fall through the cracks, keep up the good work
I started reading and was like, "I'm following this story for a reason, what is it? I don't remember the plot..." Checks chapter 19 "OOHhhhh, it's THIS story... I have to reread this."
Good to know this story isn't dead and this was a really good and sad chapter.
7465274 thank you
7465318 Made my day to see this had updated.
7465390 Glad to hear it! I should be updating more often now, so there won't be such an obscene wait between chapters again.
Well, is the claw gonna be re-forged into an actual weapon, or just left as a broken limb makeshift weapon?
Celestia needs a goddess sized bitch slap to the face, for what she did to shendu. Goooo fuck yourself, sunbutt
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I was thinking a large man, but that's insane
Another great chapter! This story is getting really good!
7516369 Sure! The more, the merrier!
7575953 as long as we know it will kill it first time, we do NOT want to risk it addapting
I honestly don't really know how to feel about this. The way this started out, the idea of putting a guy like that through the bog-standard "send the X to Ponyville" plot, just made me think "this is horribly stupid" - and it is, honestly. That part of it just plain doesn't work at all. 'Wrath,' cheesy name that he has, just doesn't belong there and it clashes horribly.
Ever since Shendu was introduced, though, the subjects it has been exploring have been pretty interesting and the answers it has given to some of them have been, in places, outright clever even. The sheer atrocity of what Celestia is perpetrating there, apparently in full understanding of it, is enough to make your neck hairs stand on end. That all the characters are actually acting as disturbed by it as I am is both welcome and something you usually distinctly don't see from this kind of story. The discussion of what "being a monster" actually means is something I find very engaging.
It's enough to make me want to see the rest of it, but this here is certainly a schizophrenic experience, that's for sure.
7611412 Right now I don' have too much free time. But once things settle down and I have more time to actually devote to the story I do plan on doing some heavy maintenance to the chapters pre-shendu.
But I simply don't have to the time to do more than check the story a few times a week.
Thank you for the input.
Don’t feel bad about delays! You’re in the military! We understand that you’re busy and delays come with the territory! It’s alright!
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I’m pretty sure Wrath not belonging and clashing with the setting is the way it’s supposed to be. He’s an outsider, an oddity in the world, who has to cope with it.