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I like this chapter. Nightmare and Shendu's interaction was great. Also, it's nice to see more background about ancient Equestria's culture.
I really hope Shendu was stopped in his track in trying to capture Luna or deal much damage...If he succeed, then why the fuck does Wrath's role matter?
6415905 How do you mean?
6432486 Wrath is there. That mean events that might have happend when he isn't there shouldn't happen.
Also...You put Wrath there...That usually mean in a narrative sense that he has to be doing something worthwide there. Otherwise, why goes into detail on his life there? You can skim through it...Something like Chekov's gun trope.
The way I see it...If he isn't there then there is no one with the power to stop Shendu guy from capturing Luna because the Elements simply aren't experienced in dealing with something like that while Wrath seem to have dealt with that thing in the pass and is used to harsh conditions, fighting, wars. The impact of War is far deeper than most people realized.
6432610 You bring up fair points I will admit. However I cannot give reasons to what happened and why without revealing the next chapter.
I assure you there is a purpose. You will have to wait for the next chapter for the answers you seek friend. Thank you for reading.
I'm a bit annoyed by these last few chapters. You're adding interesting mysteries but not giving us answers. What's up with Spike? What did he want to tell Celestia but you give no indication he told Luna? The interaction with Nightmare Moon is interesting but I'm wanting answers to older questions, not moving on with the main plot. Spike felt at least a bit natural but there Luna interaction feels like an annoying bait and switch where instead of something serious and in interesting with regards to our threat but instead I get bobbing for apples and history.
Magical Signature vanished, and it feels like a convenient Deus Ex for the bad guy... Introduced in such a strange, blunt way that still suggests it has one, and the perfect counter for Mr. Soul Seeker here...
I'm confused... I thought shendu was a girl... Most of the scenes describe a girlish voice... That usually implies its a girls unless you say earlier that shendu's a male with a girlish voice... Either that or shendu's species is very weird.
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its a trap to lure in unsuspecting ponies
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It's gender is that of a fungus as in I have to idea.