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Slowly the world builds, and I can hardly wait.
Hehe. Wrath vs. Luna in the ultimate apple bobbing challenge!
6380037 Full Contact Apple Bobbing!
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Something like this would be great to see!!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=APgd07ucSpM
Maybe change the word count to 4-4,500 over time.
really really great story. seems well thought out so far and honestly cannot wait to see where this fic is going. With that said though one major detraction from this chapter was the amount of grammar and spelling errors otherwise though a good chapter.
6400966 Really? I'll edit it again before I publish the next chapter, it sounds like I missed a lot lol.
Im happy you enjoy it!
6401717 I am absolutely enjoying this fic a lot of the errors were with gender descriptors and other minor things. with my own fic's as I do my own editing I find that if I go over each word one at a time then the entire sentence as a whole its easier to catch and fix both spelling and grammar errors although i am still plagued by grammar errors myself
typo.
....right?
....back to the corner of shame.
My life is a lie...