When she was young a misunderstanding caused Twilight to create a check list "Find out how to turn into a colt" She never did, and that checked box was never checked. Now she's older, and more powerful, and she's just re-disovered that unchecked box
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Welcome to another prelude story for my Caridoon Universe. Here Twilight and Pinkie will hopefully learn a few fun games that will stand them in good stead in the months to come.
Thank you for making this one a stand alone. I didn't want to read something like fall of Equestria. I HATE THE IDEA OF FALL OF EQUESTRIA.
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None of my further stories will be as dark as Applejacked. My whole intent was to create a universe where fun fetish play could be common, but to set up that universe I sort of got a little too involved in the world building and didn't really think about how dark it would read to anyone else.
I intend to keep a pretty light touch on further stories, and no pony is going to be enslaved against their will.
Though some of them might find themselves volunteering for things without thinking of the consequences until it is too late.
Trixie anyone?
6126805 well that makes me happy to hear it though can we get a pinky promise from you you know just in case lol
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Just to make it clear. This does take place in the same universe as Applejacked. But Applejacked was designed to turn the status quo upside down. Making Luna the primary Royal was a big part of that. It was also designed to stampede the Government into taking unjustified actions due to overestimating the threat based on poor intelligence. Of the spy variety.
Most of the Kinky stuff that is going to happen in this universe flows from that poor threat assessment.
But none of that has anything to do with the motivations in this story. None of the characters have any idea of what is happening to Applejacked who is away visiting Canterlot with her big Brother.
Referencing something are we?
6126805 Trixie deserves it.
6129401 mayyyybbbeeee
6130954 You Cheeky Dick Waffle!
6130213 Trixie definitely need to be include in this series more preferably as one of Dusk's girls.
6131787 That is not harsh enough. She needs broken in like the Doe in the previous story.
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Now now, if you want that to happen, you can't ask it of thtiger here. He already made sure his stories won't contain stuff like that. Anymore, I should say.
However, it's not a closed project. Perhaps you would like to make a suggestion in general for some other writer to pick up? Or maybe even offer to write a piece? You could join the group and give some input if you like!
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And just to make sure I'm not undermining you without meaning to: Is it still okay for other writers to delve into darker territory? Perhaps as long as they don't spiral into the level of overall hopelessness for Equestria that FoE thrives on?
6132594 Doesn't need to be in detail, just maybe a little easter egg with Trixie missing for about a month then finding her within Caridoon.
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Well... there is something interesting about the idea. I won't lie, I like it, but I'm a fan of FoE as well as Caridoon.
Is it Trixie specifically you want to see like that, or is Starlight Glimmer/Sunset Shimmer another option?
6132661 Specifically Trixie, her character has some redeamable qualities, however I tossed her to the way side as a character I could possibly like after the Alicorn amulet episode. Though Starlight Glimmer would make a Decent substitute.
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Alright! You see, some characters might already have something planned out for them, and I don't quite remember if Trixie's among those. And personally, the idea of Starlight Glimmer coming to Caridoon with the idea of turning everyone there "equal", aka useless and beneath her, and finding out the hard way that that's not going to happen is pretty funny.
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Other authors are free to be dark if they wish. There is a limit if the story is going to be considered Canon, however.
Someone could write something taking place further forward in the Time stream where Twilight has fully embraced her dominate male side and Trixie makes the mistake of challenging without knowing what is going on.
Or someone could just have Luna volunteer her to go through the Training Academy.
I like where this is going.
I must say, that chapter in the main story where you said Caridoon was created by the goddess of fluffy bunnies, it made my day. It was just too perfect.
I'm one of those girls who might, actually, like being at someone's mercy every once in awhile, so your stories are the best fetish fuel. Of course that means in real life I have to be super-duper careful not to let anyone take advantage of me, but here on the internet I can be honest about it.
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Well, hopefully I'll be able to provide you with some fun fetish fuel. Don't be shy to comment or suggest potential situations once you understand what's going on.
All right, you have my attention. Let's see where this leads me.
I will shuv a turnip so far up your nostril!
I'm not a normal human being:
My first reaction at seeing offbrand: huh what's this *keeps on watching**already knew what it was*
The corruption has settled
Nononononono I Know pinkie can be pretty..... persistent but god please don't corrupt her innocence!