When she was young a misunderstanding caused Twilight to create a check list "Find out how to turn into a colt" She never did, and that checked box was never checked. Now she's older, and more powerful, and she's just re-disovered that unchecked box
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Not exactly.
As an actor, this both intrigues and scares me. I mean, the sheer potential for chaos if you miscast or if your character is a villain of the Complete Monster trope...
See what I mean?
Luna DID say it was permanent.
Forgot to add an ending quotation mark there.
Yep.
Most would.
Eh, 6/10. And I'm generous.
So, her character sucked at sucking, she's proving to Big Mac that she herself does not.
I suppose.
It's these little asides that make this a lot more fun.
three female’s
Females. Can't believe I didn't catch that.
They have to be taunting him.
No space between voice and period.
It's magic. It doesn't have to explain crap.
Pretty sure that's just you.
Remove the second he. Yeesh, I'm usually good at catching this stuff.
Oh yeah, Dusk may not be a violent pony by nature, but even if the guy's a really powerful unicorn, Dusk is an ALICORN who probably knows a few combat spells if only for self defense. Twilight does like to be prepared. Plus, since I'm pretty sure this is post Season 4 finale, this is also the guy who managed to safely contain his magic, Celestia's, Luna's, AND Cadence's and fight toe to toe with bucking Tirek who'd absorbed all Equestrian magic and Discord's magic. And it was a stalemate. Yeah.
stallions. Either a lot of my corrections didn't cross over well to Fimfic, or I haven't done as good a job as I'd have liked.
I can see it, on one hand, you do make a good point, however, the more time you spend doing something, the more experience you get, ie, the more she's Dusk Shine, the more she gets used to being a he.
I think that would be fucking awesome. It would make sense, knowing what it feels like as a female could definitely help Dusk pleasure them. And control them.
Loved it! Looking forward to the return of Gilda.
And personally I like both POV's at once. And I truly want to see Twilight experience being Big Mac's Mare at least once.
I think both POVs are just fine.
Also:
All of my yes!
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I concur. Having Twilight experience things from the other side is something I'd definitely would like to see.
As for Flutterbat, Gilda, and Rainbow... hehe, I like to see things spread out. They might come to live as Dusk's harem, or they might find a different method of keeping each other entertained in the way they desire. Especially since Dusk isn't somepony I can see fulfilling their kinks as well as he does with Pinkie and Applejack.
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Well, that sort of settles things. Twilight will for sure, in the name of science, try out the other side.
Does leave me with a bit of a conundrum. Twilight is not a submissive, despite her attitude toward Celestia. Dusk Shine loves having total control, and the whole reason Twilight wanted to turn into a colt all those years ago was if given a choice as to getting spanked, or doing the spanking, she knew which she preferred.
I can't simply have her engage in slave/master roll play with Big Mac. It would not fit her character. Are you still interested in seeing her having sex with Big Mac if it does not involve slave play? Does not mean Big Mac would not take control of the situation, but it would be more his experience leading her inexperience rather than a BDSM situation.
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On the other hand, Twilight is the sort to insist on scientific rigor, and that for her study to have any validity, she must experience what normal slave mares do. She might not be aroused by being a slave, but does not mean she would not react to Big Mac's physical attentions.
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There are several variations to the scenario.
One is making it completely vanilla. No kink included; it's to allow Twilight a chance to experience her feminine sensuality so she can compare.
Another is to keep her as the dominant part, but perhaps not as extreme. I suggested having Mac blindfolded but unbound; rather than rutting Twilight like he would Bother this allows her to explore another male's body. In a way, it's still servicing him since she's 'doing all the work', at least until they come to a point where she'd like for him to participate in a more active manner.
And, of course, a scenario which shows that Twilight has trouble letting go of being dominant by having Big MacIntosh indulge her in it, couched in a 'scientific approach'. Twilight would decide what's going to happen at what point.
"Alright, now let's try the cuffs. Hmm, I see. They're... not quite as comfortable. A little cold, and they don't yield. At all. With, um, with my hands cuffed, my breasts feel really exposed. This is the part where the male character usually turns to groping the female for some time. Big Mac, if you would... mmmh... N-not being able to shield them d-does add ah, a certain thrill. A-and the, oh, the stiff nipples make for an easy target."
So you could make her a power bottom.
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Well, I do want to keep the BDSM elements, even if they are done with a light touch. So yeah, you both make good points. I'm starting to see how it could be fun to do Twilight trying to control every aspect of her "enslavement" and "Ravaging"
not a huge fan of twilight having to be the stallion forever.
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Twilight has control of her gender. The destruction of the antidote trapped her, but only for a few extra days. Just long enough for her to get a real taste of being a sexually active stallion. But she has the means to turn back into a mare.
It just depends on the plot.
Most of what we've seen of mac is dominant and controlling. It would be interesting to see his soft side, assuming he still has one.