When she was young a misunderstanding caused Twilight to create a check list "Find out how to turn into a colt" She never did, and that checked box was never checked. Now she's older, and more powerful, and she's just re-disovered that unchecked box
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Ha that ending..
well that went wrong fast and pinkie will chew rares a new one for knocking out dusky
Err...
I suppose.
Leave it to Dusk to overthink getting laid.
Pie.
Doubt it. Also, you're.
It's Pinkie Pie, don't question it.
I can't tell if she does this on purpose or not. Also, you double spaced between you'd and likely.
*snerk*
Uh, Pinkie...
Not ALL evil twins, but it certainly helps.
She's right.
Not surprised.
This amuses me way more than it should.
Eh?
Pinkie Pie is going to be PISSED that you ruined her fun.
You need to update Pinkie's dialogue, her saying woohoo throughs me off every time, maybe teach her the fun of saying adult words?
Pinkie: And that's the day you were conceived!
Future foal of Pinkie and Twilight:....... I'm going to pretend that all you told me is that a stork brought me to you guys. And I going to need lots and lots of therapy.
Pinkie: YAY! It's fun to pretend!
6670934 It's Pinkie's thing. She can call it whatever she wants.^_^ Seriously, anyone else feel the same way? Once the cast expands there will be lots of proper adult words in use. I suppose Pinkie could start using standard profanity as part of the language of the game?
6670851 Thanks for pointing out the typos.
6670789 Everypony thinks Pinkie's going to be pissed, instead of excited that a new pony has decided to join the game. Cause make no mistake about it, she is. Joining the game that is.
6671891
Don't get me wrong, it fits her character, especially the version of it you have made. It is just... I don't know, throws me off a bit, I can deal, just sort of hope she does learn some of the more adult words of it.
Doesn't ruin the story for me, I still plan to read more, and look forward to more!
6671902 I like to use word choice for characters that fit their character. Why Twilight tends to use correct terms like copulate. And why Rainbow Dash will tend toward non-stop profanity, but I'll be loosing up on that as they get into the first the game, and later the roles they'll have to play to blend in to Caridoon culture.
6671891 well she is getting interrupted by rares while getting rutted
6671891
Excited that Rarity is joining, pissed that she ruined her fun.
6671191
Er... did you mean a stork?
Because it's going to be even weirder if they had kids because one of them had a stroke.
6682257
There corrected